I still find it stupid that you made Harry turns down the badge. I've lost interest in your story...

Well, it finally turned quite good storry. Little difference in characters, some magic, magic theory... And battle scenes are fine as well. I just want to say thanks for a few good days of reading. And thnanks for not too much of sex scenes, because your storry is strong by other components. I guess that you underestimate your ability to write good advantures.

Good

Loved the story, thanks for sharing it with us.

It's kind of bad that you didn't let Ginmy prove herself a little before she died. Take down a low level death eater or something.

Hes a witness though. And so is the girl. Better than before. And I almost feel bad for Tom. Bella want just the most loyal. She was also the most dangerous competent death eater he had. Now...

The problem is forgiveness is earned by honest repentance, and trust is built up again over time . And Albus would probably make the same choices over again even if he could change things. And honestly Albus is one to talk, he doesn't trust most of his secrets with anybody.

Won't lie I wanted to mirder you for Ginny. But thank you for one of the greatest fics I've ever read.

I enjoyed these works. Thank you for finishing and sharing them.

GOOD

Fabulous job even you broke my heart a couple of times. Sniff.

You write realistic characters and create cunnning plots.

But try easing up on the gory rape scenes. Yes its wromg to believe they don't occur. But an over emphasis cheapens the horror. Furthwr in a world of deadly witches its unlikely all attempts will succeed. Or in the alternative another witch wouldn't take the revenge.

You otherwise write very interesting and intelligent female characters. If you didn't I would have stopped reading. I certainly wouldn't take the time to ask you to consider changing

Cute story wasn't happy about ginny*dirty look* but the story was well written and easy enough to read.

Here is how I would politely say something I want to do to Rufus.
I wish to acquaint your face with a brick, repeatedly.
Impolite. #$&"(#$%&&# $$##%% # !mother ##%%$ %&&%$#%! %#$

This was a rather intriguing and fantastic story.
I am so glad i read the entire story, it is by far the best Harry/Slytherin story i have read.
well of course i read the first section of the story but the overall story was fantastic :)
Thankyou for the story :)
DH

You piece of fucking shit now you've done it, you have effectively just taken what little fragmented piece of relationship Ginny and Draco had and torn it to pieces fuck you dickhead!