Very nice story. Thank You.

Writing this first comment at the chapter of Riddle Manor attack. Firstly, your story is good and certainly deserves more views. Now moving on,a gist of my comments/feedback.
Inheritance Ritual scene should have been written and shown. These kind of scenes are not only important but are also loved.
Harry Potter and him not being shown at least loving
Quidditch, not showing him as seeker is unthinkable. This is one of the basic character traits which shouldn't be changed in fan fictions or compromised!
Now to Riddle Manor attack scene. This may be your weekest written chapter. To think after so much training, especially that undertaken in Peru. You showed Harry reckless, not alert to surroundings and to every eventuality including of Magical signatures. Him fighting worse than a common powerful wizard, mindless of other fighters, attackers in picture. Mindless of paying heed to all threats, jumping like an amateur to save Hermione. When I remember correctly that his teacher at Peru had given him sword to be kept on his body all the time. Must say was the weakest, worst written chapter. Just to show Barty Crouch Jr. And Voldemort escape and to show Hermione destroying Horcrux of snake! Even Harry could have destroyed it and without getting bitten. Hermione is ok, but she is only a supporter in story, not the hero.

Great story

Estou adorando a história, maravilhosa. Muito bem escrita, apesar do tempo estar meio perdido, ocasionalmente. A inclusão de outras culturas é ótima, e o relacionamento entre as crianças dos anos mais baixos, os amigos e os professores do 'casal Potter' trouxeram bastante impacto para a mudança social. Parabéns.
Só uma coisa que me irrita é o fato do Harry sempre ser o mais poderoso, inteligente e alcançar tudo primeiro, a maneira como ele sempre é perfeito em relação aos outros me irrita, porque todos acabam por parecer menos. Sinto falta de um pouco do fogo da Hermione também.

I adore how Harry is helping bolster Hermione's confidence while dealing nicely with the lazy dorm mates.

They are really cute together!

"for society's benefit" Hufflepuff ya moron

At this point even I have to consider Harry a swot.

Thank you for sharing your creativity.

“Macnair has to go, but how?” Huh?!
Haven’t they been snatching DEs at will using the Dark Mark? Not grabbing him as soon as Harry recognized him as a threat is the biggest plot hole in this story, IMO. Either that or don’t make a point of Harry recognizing Macnair as a threat.

Why does no one ever bring bring up the negative population rate in the Wizarding world in these discussions? Even without wars, a society where couples typically have just one child is a dying society. Due childhood mortality, each couple needs to average about 2.5 live births just to maintain the population.

If Harry recognized the threat posed by McNair, why wasn't he the next DE snatched?

I am relieved that the incorrect usage of the word "incumbent" seems to have disappeared from this fic. It was rampant earlier in the story and it was driving me to distraction. I haven't noticed it in recently chapters and it is conspicuous by its absence.
Other than that vocabulary distraction that seems to be gone, I'm really enjoying this story.

They are seriously going to leave him in the castle with children around? They are useless...which was proven during the raid where nothing came of it but Harry’s injury. Why are they all acting so stupid now? For the most part this has been a great story but now they keep acting like fools.

So Harry just lets Molly treat Hermione like crap? She’s his betrothed. No wonder she still questions how he feels at times.