| Reviews for Avengers: Battleground |
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carlos01cg10 chapter 48 . 7/31 God this story is amazing. you mad genius please continue this if you can! I've read over thousand fanfics from different authors or topics (PJO, HP, Marvel, etc) and this story is one of the few that made me wanna cry at times please continue this! |
StarInMyEye chapter 48 . 7/31 Nice! |
JOHN0713 chapter 41 . 7/27 Good chapter except the praise for that idiot Obama. |
Ykomat chapter 1 . 7/26 If you are going to continue this I think you should have Harry and Wanda go on vacation to the locations in the movies coincidentally and meet Peter and his friends |
Guest chapter 21 . 7/23 Yeah, no. Bringing back the Wizarding World for the sake of originality kind of ruined the whole thing. It could've been something if he got there by accident and he's trying to find his way back. But you started this fic as a dimension travel fic where harry got fed up and left his home universe so the whole thing kind of felt pointless, you know what I'm saying? Still, the first 20 chapters had been mostly okay so I guess this was just a gamble that kind of flopped. |
snakehulk chapter 9 . 7/19 his name isnt hadrian, its a shitty fannon name because "harry" isnt edgy and cool enough for people stop it, stop using it, dont be an edgelord |
TRYRAEL BLACK.B chapter 48 . 7/17 HI WAS VERY NICE YOU MARRIED A 10 OUT OF 10 JEJE I WILL WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER GREETINGS FROM MONTERREY NEW LEON JEJE XDD |
TheAutarch chapter 48 . 7/17 alright. |
Brandon Boodoo chapter 20 . 7/13 Lol so much chapters and then on this one its the same as the movie... |
jazreelmallari chapter 11 . 7/11 Pls check this part, and think you placed two version of the confrontation and reveal that harry is a seidhr |
fundoogal chapter 10 . 7/4 this chapter needs a revision. first person to third person, tense everything is messed up. its getting difficult to read. |
Tyfli barda chapter 1 . 7/3 It has great potential, but the story is all over the place. You keep repeating the same thing over and over again. We get it the witch hunt happened, bla, bla bad, bla, bla muggles evil; after twentieth time I wanted to burn the computer to end my suffering. The grammar is off, story-plot that goes nowhere and you keep introducing them anyway and nothings happens. And Harry Potters power is even more confusing like the story itself is inconsistent as hell. The protagonist feels arrogant and kind of dumb and childish yet you keep trying to portray him as powerful and humble, the guy actually says that he is humble in the most arrogant way? Sorry but one to many mistakes in story, writing,character makes it difficult to continue reading. Perhaps, try to edit and revise the story to make it more coherent. |
ShadowPhoenix99 chapter 48 . 7/3 This is my favorite harry potter and avengers crossover along with heroes assemble. I especially loved the Sovokia Accords arc where Harry was so bad ass being ruthless, issuing threats to the entire world and fooling everyone. I'm dying to know if their plan works to bring everyone back. What was that explosion? And if everyone who died 10 years back comes back to life, does it include Thanos? Speaking of him, I really thought Harry was bluffing about not fighting Thanos, especially since he told his teammates that he would indeed fight him. And what happened to the wizarding world? Did Thanos destroy half of the witches and wizards as well? Please please please update this fic. I'm really eager to read the next chapter. |
HDII chapter 48 . 7/3 This is/has been pretty interesting. The grammer and sentence structure needs a huge lift in quality, and the whole story is all over place, choppy at best, but the idea/plot is still not too bad, so i hope that you will continue this story. |
Kitsune Obsessed Freak chapter 30 . 6/29 If it's fruitful, then that means it's very productive and they're getting what they want out of it. You are looking for the term unfruitful, which means unproductive. |