Yeah... No!
The way you killed Sirius is clearly you "playing" with the reader.
I hate it when authors do that...
So dropped

Didn't the Goyle house have anti portkey wards? How the hell did they port him out?

If Voldemort used fiendfyre to burn down the entire neighborhood, Sirius would've had ample time to leave. He's wizard, not a muggle that can get trapped by fire. Really silly plot hole.

You are evil - killing Sirius after the Ministry trap was avoided.
And actually i don’t buy the Voldemort and Bella destroying Grimmauld‘s place. The library there holds lots of knowledge Voldy would want and might not be able to get elsewhere - i don’t think he would ever destroy it like this when there is a chance to get that knowledge. That Bella can pinpoint that location that accurately - sounds unlikely to me. The fidelius plus her years in Azkaban should have hindered her. The oh yeah there it is and boom everything burning to the ground - nope- doesn’t sound believable at all.

I'm sad that you stopped writing after this was completed. It was one of my favorite stories in its day and I still remember it fondly and have re-read it a time or two. Thanks for sharing your works with us!

poor Astoria but yet another plan of voldie's down the drain

lol if this follows canon then voldy already destroyed the locket when he burned down the black house

nice

Overall, a good AU story. Nice final battle and involvement from everyone.

I think you have an issue with Bellatrix, however. Never clear how she went from St. Mungo’s to the RoR. Are we to simply assume she escaped Dumbledore? You left the impression Dumbledore had finally decided someone deserved to die.

Ok, this author’s note is hilarious. I’m now picturing Harry writing a check to SHIELD to simply take out Tom, Fudge, the Death Eaters, etc...lol.

Thanks for writing this!

I like this story, but I should point out- not knowing Sirius very well wouldn’t absolve him of any grief, really. All it’d do was introduce a new foe of it- the fact he never really got to know the man, and wondering what his life would have been like if he’d survived. Just sayin’.

It was just so unnecessary to kill black the way you did you didn't kill him the cannon way only to kill him some other way immediately after. making the only difference be that after a bref moment of relief for the reader come down with crushing disappointment..

I absolutely love this story, especially how you portrayed Dobby. Fuckin love that elf. The dialogue wasn't too over the top or dramatic and I could honestly feel some sort of humanity and reason in what Harry (and his squad) did during the war; I also hate rapists and I also wish they would die, killing Voldemort would be too good and nullifying the use of his horcruxes was also brilliant seeing as the former Dark Lord has no sense or sanity left in his head. I'm not one for romance or too much drama, so I admit I skipped a massive chunk of the mushiness between Naruto and Daphne, and the parts I read felt...off...to me, maybe cuz I'm not one for love, idk. I also like Tonks answer to Remus worrying about her being pregnant in a war, I appreciate how it just HAPPENED from out of nowhere. Some parts of this story were hard to read cuz of the grammar, spelling and dialogue but overall, it was a wonderful experience.
Well done, bud.
Stay awesome

A very good AU Harry Potter.

Harry’s brain engages half way through year 5. He becomes a politician and military commander. He also demonstrates why Horcruxes aren’t all they are cracked up to be.

Recommended.

Thanks for the good read you gave us. SOme really great idea, perfectible execution :p loved it