Eh, Luna? Erm, you're the brainless twit who PUT HARRY'S NAME INTO THE FUCKING GOBLET YOU FUCKING NUMPTY!

Ugh, writer, if you didn't like Harry, why did you write a story with him in it? This is basically a "Luna attempts to murder her so-called husband and he apologizes to her for it" mound of crass bullshit.

I'm having a hard time believing Luna would be that stupid. I mean...honestly.

This story is such fun.

Poor hubby is going to get his butt kicked here - insert scene of violence not suited for children.

Ok, I admit I'm wrong, won't say about what in case someone's reading the reviews on the app before the story. It worked out awesome in the end. Aside from that one chapter that still vaguely bugs me, it was an awesome read and I highly recommend! Definitely favouriting! Thank you author.

Still ranting about the last chapter, because I ran out of review posts, but I'm still reading stuff that infuriates me enough to make a review. Everytime I read them leaving fake Moody alone despite knowing he's an imposter I feel a small part of my soul die, taking a scrap of my intellect with it. Why the hell wouldn't they at least owl Moody to check? Argh, infuriating plot choice!
Not to mention that they suspect Dumbledore knows but aren't sure, like why don't they just bloody tell him. If he knows good for him, if he doesn't well there's no justification why Moody shouldn't have told him, so that would mean the fake Moody is doing something nefarious, which we know he is. It's just argh, I can't stress that enough, I've literally shouted it outloud while reading. ARGH. Infuriation is not a good headspace to out your readers into. At this point I'm skim reading most of it because I'm too frustrated to have the patience to read and I know if I take the time to calm down I'll just be infuriated again when I come back and the situation isn't resolved.
It's just a bad plot choice which is disappointing because I love the rest of the plot. I'd much rather Luna be too stupid to recognise Moody is fake than be too stupid to report it!
Ok rant over, may rant again, 'cause it does calm me, depends how much longer this goes on for and whether I work up another full head of steam.

Infuriating can't stress that word enough. Infuriating and frustrating. I feel like screaming "Just tell someone!" while slapping both characters silly.

Infuriating reasoning, and a big stretch on the authors part to try and make it work when it doesn't need to

What the actual heck? Way to ruin being an animagus!

I have read this story a few times and mostly enjoy it, but this chapter - and part of the previous one - leave me totally baffled.

Fact: Luna has, from childhood, conditioned Harry to just follow her in her adventures
Fact: She did not tell him why she wanted to analyse and go through the age line
Fact: She was too cowardly to put her own name on the paper
Fact: She stupidly did not put "Babbity Rabbity" or "Marvin the Mad Muggle" on it, but Harry's name
Fact: With her actions, she put her husband's life in danger

Also taking into account how absolutely terrified Harry must be (after all, he is not canon Harry who is used to all crap in the world being dumped on his head), why is HE the one who must apologize?
I do not get it. In my world, little Ms "I am the cleverest witch with the best mage sight ever" should eat a ton of humble pie.
I think I may just copy this chapter, rewrite it (only for my own, private use, of course - I would never steal intellectual property) to make HER suffer a bit more and give a little more support to Harry. I'll do that in my head anyway.

Rest of the story is brilliant. Sorry you haven't published anything new in a while.

Bravo, well done. Thanks for creating this story.

Reread this again. Stiilllllll loved it :)

I got serious Warren vibes when Luna said 'there will be no more strange occurrences'

Luna executes what is effectively a Murder attempt on Harry,
and she compares it to the disagreement they had when Harry didn't believe in one of her Creatures? (one that didn't exist!)

wow.

Ouf!
We really had spelling going sideways in this chapter!

There are meals being "severed",
a sentence ending with ", as well as wards - the .",
sentences being comma-chopped into a series of single words,
and other similar monstrosities.

The story is still good, and captivating to the imagination.
It's just that the spelling and grammar could use a makeover.