| Reviews for The Second Chance |
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PurpleArrowhead chapter 1 . 6/3 Ron and the Weasleys sounds like a terrible highschool band. Love the story btw, it has excellent writing and interactions. |
Starlord Master chapter 1 . 5/23 Some read. |
lolo nade chapter 1 . 8/27/2019 He’s mentally mature but still reacts like a child in some places |
pjtoolz14 chapter 1 . 7/13/2019 It is amazing when you can find a one-shot that is so good it seems longer than the 100,000 words plus fanfiction's. great fanfic |
darkrage2001 chapter 1 . 2/19/2019 Good story |
ak chapter 1 . 1/8/2019 bonne fic! |
PasiveNox chapter 1 . 9/4/2018 Hehehehhehe yeah it's great |
Inu-shommaru chapter 1 . 8/7/2018 This was a most excellent read; one of the best HP/RWBy crossovers, and certainly one of the better crossovers I've been privy to thus far. You did great with characterization, and not muddling personalities together; keeping them true to self, especially within the confines of the story. The execution was pretty much flawless as well, and I enjoyed the epilogue immensely. I saw you get fatigued midway through; grammatical errors popped up, as well as few punctuation issues. They, however, resolved themselves and resumed the superb quality shortly thereafter. I can only assume that you powered through writer's block, or you were tired at that point - props for your recovery on that. |
Therio chapter 1 . 6/26/2018 I'm not a big game player, so was able to read this story with no preconceptions based on te games. That said, I really enjoyed this story and am sorry to see it end. |
FanficFanatic927 chapter 1 . 2/18/2018 this is honestly the best HP/RWBY fic that I have ever read. it had good word choice and made very little spelling errors; on top of that they mad e a very interesting story that had me read from start to finish in one go. the story itself has an amazing plot and is an all around excellent story. honestly, if u wasn't afraid of losing the amazing story, I would ask for more of this. |
starboy454 chapter 1 . 2/13/2018 excellent story |
comodo50 chapter 1 . 12/25/2017 A really fantastic story, thanks for writing it :) |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/14/2017 Auntie Meme? |
Ryoji Mochizuki chapter 1 . 5/31/2017 very nice fanfic, well written, well made, good job |
Pyrovian Pavrent chapter 1 . 4/17/2017 I love your story anf I hope you create an AU version fusion with your other story that I like to see |