God; this was pure and utter garbage. Complete trash, holy shit you cannot write if you’re life depended on it.

Normally I’m never this mean but my god was this fucking garbage. This whole fanfic was a bloody illusion itself. One I’ve gladly overcome.

Loved it! :-D

Besides that, the story is beautifulgood work buddy \m/

I am not sure, how can the flight from London to Sydney takes only 20 min?

BRave of Draco and Ginny... I believe in redemption.

This chapter made mi cried. I cried for Harry, Andromeda, and Teddy. Feel bad for them

This is pretty dumb to be honest. How exactly is Draco "innocent"? I mean I have nothing against arguing for a reduced sentence, but _innocent_? Really? On the other hand Narcissa gets life in Azkaban for being married to a Death Eater and being a huge bitch in general? What exactly did she do except aiding and abetting a Terrorist? ... and then the cherry on this bullshit sundae: Draco gets to return to Hogwarts? That's insane. "Oh yeah, welcome back, I'm sure the children in this school will feel save around a hateful bigot who actually allowed an assault force into a school in order to assassinate the Headmaster. Nothing wrong with that idea, no sir. I'm sure you're totally mentally stable too. It will be fine!"

I just finished reading the first chapter and merlin I can't stop crying (ಥ_ಥ)

I think the thing I love about reading your Harmony fics is how well they all blend together. The interpretation of Harry and hermione's characters differs heaps between authors so it's so refreshing to read so many different stories of the two same characters acting in incredibly imaginative different situations. I have really loved all of your longer 70'000 word Harmony fics. Thank you

Hermione is right, of course. Harry did have so much on his plate, every year. If he didn't react, he would have not made it.

Not until it was all over, did he have time for introspection. And when he did, the answer came right out. The right answer, with the right person.

D. Page Robin

Enjoyed the story, very fluffy, very sweet and idyllic. Well done, a very easy read.

D. Page Robin

Awesome story favorite and follow u and it :):):):

Once Harry and Hermione finally got together, this became one of the fluffiest, sappiest fanfics I've ever read... and I LOVED IT! Sometimes, an author may try to hash together a romance fic, overstuffed with fluff. These often come through as shallow and boring. This story is nothing like that. It's engaging, well-written, and moving. Every "I love you" is more powerful than the next. Thank you for this!

jkj

I really enjoyed this story even if the grammar made it quite hard to read sometimes. It seemed like whenever I got into a rhythm reading the story there would be a series of words that I'd have to stop and puzzle out the meaning of. In the end it was worth it though because of the great job you did with the characters and the excellent case you made for Harmony.

I think you show a lot of talent for writing. You show an exceptional understanding of how the characters should act and interact and put together a nice story with the legillimency and cup horcrux plot. I think once you get a little more skill you'll make for an excellent writer, you already have the important part and just need to get the basic mechanics and proper word choice/usage down to become something truly special. I just looked at your profile and saw that you're from Greece so English probably is probably a second language for you and that was what I had guessed. I think with a really good beta to fixing those issues for you you'd probably be on a lot more people's favorites lists.

Thank you for writing and I hope you continue to do so.