| Reviews for Triwizard Tournament: Take Two |
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   tsubasaiscool chapter 16 . 7/29 Please update soon. Love this story |
| Guest chapter 16 . 7/6 tarda mucho mas que dos años, una lastima es muy buena |
| LunaLovegood201 chapter 16 . 6/26 unfortunately, it's 2020, and the story isn't done. I'm not judging, but can I ask you why the delay in your story? |
| tricorvus chapter 11 . 6/14 I'm sorry to read of all your travails. Reading fanfiction got me through some tough times. I hope that in the intervening years since the last time you wrote, that things have gotten much better; as they have for me. You're a very good writer rock on |
| renextronex chapter 3 . 6/8 The story seems to be pretty good at a concept level, but you need better writing skills to actually pull it off, the dialogue is pretty awful |
| renextronex chapter 2 . 6/8 the dialogue and monologue is rather awkward, also occlumency shouldn't be what you use to communicate with others, the name makes no sense in that case, you should have just called it telepathy |
| Redwing1co chapter 12 . 5/29 Enjoying your story, just finished chap. 12joping to read more of this story |
| EmperorGhoul chapter 3 . 5/13 Dumbledore is mental put him in prison. How stupid can Harry be |
| Fleamont Pottter chapter 11 . 5/13 The alchemy is from full metal alchemist. |
| williamhaysjr chapter 15 . 3/27 trying to create another Professor Snape? Remember what bullying did to him, turned him first into a Death Eater and then the most hated teacher in Hogwarts. Those girls should have at least had to serve detention (it would have been worth it). Just like Martin Luther King Jr. do the crime and pay the fine. (this post was suppose to be on chapter 14 but they only allow one per chapter). |
| Guest chapter 3 . 3/23 I would have named it Order of the Basilisk representing Slytherin's monster. Then again, I wouldn't because the Basilisk was defeated by Harry. |
| masterdude94 chapter 16 . 3/8 This is an amazing story! All that I ask is that you consider looking for inspiration to continue this. Your writing is very well done, bar a few typos. Regardless, if you ever continue this, I would definitely keep reading! |
| rdoglover5679 chapter 16 . 3/4 The only flaw is that you didn’t continue writing |
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/24 Re |
| vampdreams chapter 16 . 2/10 I have absolutely loved this! I really wish you had continued If you ever find it to write more of this, I would love to read it I like the fact that there's no unnecessary drama; yes Ron is a bitch, but he's done and dusted I also adore the relations between the folks, platonic and romantic |
