I am new to writing stories and I would appreciate it if you don't flame me. I don't have a beta reader so I'm sorry for any errors. I would also appreciate any thoughts on what story I should try to write next.

Something is happening with my stories when i publish them and they're comming out looking more like computer code than any readable things.

I am able to be a beta for any one.

I can be a beta for anyone if you want me to.

My OC's

HUMANS

Angela-5'4", light blonde, 16 years old, violet eyes, likes anything to do with Jazz and Bumblebee, very kind and shy unless you mess with her friends.

Sarah- about 4 ft. tall, shy, doesn't trust people easily, long black curly hair,

TRANSFORMERS

Sonicboom- about 2 ft. taller than Arcee, transforms into a sleek 2009 mainly purple with black racing stripes. Loves speeding. Protective of the people she cares about.

DRAGONS

Midnight-

Rose-

Ruby-

Silverstreak-

Gold-

Pyra-

If you've ever cried when listening to Transformers music...

If you've ever sworn to be an Autobot/Decepticon...

If you've ever compared a guy to a Transformer...

If you still read fanfics and watch the films even when people call you a nerd...

If you broke your heart when your favorite one died...

... and cheered like Hell itself had fallen when they returned to life...

... Post this, fellow Transfan, and know that we are more than meets the eye.

I'm the one who finds a lost, sick cat and nurses it back to health.

I'm the one who finds a baby bird and help it go back to it's nest.

I'm the one who makes the car stop just to let a dog pass.

I'm the one who can stay all day just looking at a wolf.

I'm the one who sees the grace in a leopard's leap.

I'm the one who smiles at a swiming crocodile.

I'm the one who sees the majesty of an eagle's soar.

But I'm also the one who can't believe how people can hurt these living beings.

I'm also the one who cries when a dog is obliged to fight.

I'm also the one who watches in horror as a leopard's fur is sold.

I'm also the one who yells at anyone who will shoot a wolf.

I'm also the one who is outraged as a crocodile is hunted for meat.

I'm also the one who feels the pain of a cat that had been kicked.

I'm also the one who whimpers when I see eagle's feathers on clothing.

If you believe that animals have the same right to live as us, copy and paste this into your profile and add your name to the list: Cheetahstar, Wheeliefan101,velociraptor4659, astrochrist

If you've ever cried when listening to Transformers music...

If you've ever sworn to be an Autobot/Decepticon...

If you've ever compared a guy to a Transformer...

If you still read fanfics and watch the films even when people call you a nerd...

If it broke your heart when your favorite one died...

...and you cheered like hell itself had fallen when they returned to life...

...Post this, fellow Transfan, and know that we are more than meets the eye

FRIENDS: Will comfort you when the guy rejects you
BEST FRIENDS: Will go up to him and say 'it’s because your gay isn't it?'

FRIENDS: Borrows your stuff for a few days then gives it back.
BEST FRIENDS: Loses your crap and tells you, "My bad...here's a tissue."

FRIENDS: Call your parents by Mr. and Mrs. and Grandpa, by Grandpa.
BEST FRIENDS: Call your parents DAD and MOM and Grandpa, GRAMPS!

FRIENDS: Lend you their umbrella
BEST FRIENDS: Take yours and say 'RUN BITCH RUN!'

FRIENDS: Never ask for anything to eat or drink.
BEST FRIENDS: Helps themselves and are the reason why you have no food.

FRIENDS: Would bail you out of jail.
BEST FRIENDS: Would be sitting next to you sayin "DAMN! We messed up! But, it was fun!"

FRIENDS: Have never seen you cry.
BEST FRIENDS: Won't tell everyone else you cried...just laugh about it with you in private when your not down anymore.

FRIENDS: Asks you to write down your number.
BEST FRIENDS: Has you on speed dial.

FRIENDS: Only know a few things about you.
BEST FRIENDS: Could write a very embarrassing biography on your life story...

FRIENDS: Will leave you behind if that is what the crowd is doing.
BEST FRIENDS: Will kick the whole crowds ass that left you

FRIENDS: Would knock on your front door.
BEST FRIENDS: Walk right in and say "I'M HOME."

FRIENDS: You have to tell them not to tell anyone.
BEST FRIENDS: Already know not to tell.

FRIENDS: Are only through high school/college. (aka: drinking buddies)
BEST FRIENDS: Are for life.

FRIENDS: You never have to worry about getting pranked.
BEST FRIENDS: Are why you are paranoid out of your mind and sleep with a supersoaker.

FRIENDS: Are only faintly amusing
BEST FRIENDS: Are invaluable.

FRIENDS: Never make out in front of you
BEST FRIENDS: Let you film it.

FRIENDS: Would ignore this.
BEST FRIENDS: Will repost this shit!

In case you needed further proof that the human race is doomed through stupidity, here are some actual label instructions on consumer goods:

On a Sears hairdryer:
Do not use while sleeping. (What if I don't know I'm using it while sleeping?).

On a bag of Fritos!
..You could be a winner! No purchase necessary. Details inside. (So... I don't have to pay for the Fritos? Cool! :D)

On a bar of Dial soap:
"Directions: Use like regular soap." (How would that be...?)

On some Swanson frozen dinners:
"Serving suggestion: Defrost." (Nah, you can eat it frozen. It's all good!).

On Tesco's Tiramisu dessert (printed on bottom):
"Do not turn upside down." (Well...duh, a bit late, huh)!

On Marks & Spencer Bread Pudding:
"Product will be hot after heating." (You thought it would be cold...?)

On packaging for a Rowenta iron:
"Do not iron clothes on body." (But, wouldn't this save me more time?)

On Boot's Children Cough Medicine:
"Do not drive a car or operate machinery after taking this medication." (We would be so much better off if those little 5 year olds with head colds would stop driving while sick.)

On Nytol Sleep Aid:
"Warning: May cause drowsiness." (Isn't that the point...?)

On most brands of Christmas lights:
"For indoor or outdoor use only." (There is more than just indoor and outdoor???)

On a Japanese food processor:
"Not to be used for the other use." (Now, what could that 'other use' be??? O.O)

On Sunsbury's peanuts:
"Warning: contains nuts." (Talk about a news flash...)

On an American Airlines packet of nuts:
"Instructions: Open packet, eat nuts." (Step 3: maybe, uh...fly Delta?)

On a child's superman costume:
"Wearing of this garment does not enable you to fly." (I don't blame the company. I blame the parents for this one.)

On a Swedish chainsaw:
"Do not attempt to stop chain with your hands or genitals." (..was there a lot of this happening somewhere?)

On T-Rat (Military food):
Its not for Human Consumption, Animals and Military Use only... (Ummm yeah... isn't military also human?)

1-You hug every yellow vehicle thinking its Bumblebee. (One day, it will be Bumblebee that I hug)

2-You look for the Decepticon insignia on every black and white police car. (I do this every time, and look for the "To punish and enslave".)

3-You suspect every semi truck with flames is Optimus Prime, (I have never seen one of these...)

4-You look at ever black and while cop cars for the phrase 'To punish and Enslave'. (I like Barricade and think he's cool)

5-You constantly wait for things to crash from Decepticon attack. (At least things won't be boring)

6-You cannot look at a boombox the same way anymore. (I want one just to call it Frenzy)

7-You used to hate technology and now you love it. (I have always loved technology, I just love it more now :D)

8-You see the title Deception and think Decepticon. (All the fraggin' time!!!)

9-You name your stuff after Autobots or Decepticons. (My cellphone is named Jazz while my computer is Soundwave)

10-Radio Controlled robots are no longer good enough for you. (Never liked them, I want the real deal!)

11-You start fights with Pirates of the Caribbean, Harry Potter, and Twilight fans and state a 200-page thesis why the Transformers are better than pirates and wizards and vampires. (Haven't done that yet but now I will :3)

13-You see an ambulance and think it is Ratchet. (Maybe he won't hear me when I call him Hatchet instead...)

14-You state that Jenny (XJ9) is sucky in comparison to Arcee. (So true!!)

15-You know each song ever used in TF. (Have them all on my phone/mp3/computer)

16-You think Stan Bush is hiding secrets to the locations of real TF’s. (I will find them!)

17-You think Darth Vader is a wuss and Megatron is the real Lord of the Sith. (Pit YES!)

18-You want to join the Air Force or Navy just to fly a F-22 or F-15 or F-16. (I would name it Starscream :D)

19-You write an essay for school on what you want to be when you grow up about how you want to be an Autobot when you grow up.(Change Autobot with Decpticon)

20-You get your parents obsessed with it as well. (My dad and I watched the whole Transformers: Prime series together)

21-You give people headaches from constant babble on TF theories. (They have learned to drown me out)

22-You start calling all insects Insecticons. (Stupid insecticons, they be creepy)

23-You cannot hear the word blackout without thinking of Blackout. (Yes! xD)

24-You start trying to talk like Blurr. (Only with lots of sugar...)

25-You used to hate the color yellow and now love it. (Only when yellow is paired up with black)

26-You look at a map of astronomy and try to locate planet Cybertron. (My Astronomy teacher found this hilarious)

27-You think the end of the world will come from Unicron. (If this happens, we are screwed)

28-You saw the movie over 25 times. (I lost count...)

--You add to this list.

This is a story about God. Read if you believe in him, and read even if you don't.

A teenage girl about 17 named Diane had gone to visit some friends one evening and time passed quickly as each shared their various experiences of the past year. She ended up staying longer than planned, and had to walk home alone. She wasn't afraid because it was a small town and she lived only a few blocks away.

As she walked along under the tall elm trees, Diane asked God to keep her safe from harm and danger. When she reached the alley, which was a short cut to her house, she decided to take it. However, halfway down the alley she noticed a man standing at the end as though he were waiting for her. She became uneasy and began to pray, asking for God's protection. Instantly a comforting feeling of quietness and security wrapped round her, she felt as though someone was walking with her. When she reached the end of the alley, she walked right past the man and arrived home safely.

The following day, she read in the newspaper that a young girl had been raped in the same alley just twenty minutes after she had been there. Feeling overwhelmed by this tragedy and the fact that it could have been her, she began to weep. Thanking the Lord for her safety and to help this young woman, she decided to go to the police station. She felt she could recognize the man, so she told them her story. The police asked her if she would be willing to look at a lineup to see if she could identify him. She agreed and immediately pointed out the man she had seen in the alley the night before. When the man was told he had been identified, he immediately broke down and confessed. The officer thanked Diane for her bravery and asked if there was anything they could do for her. She asked if they would ask the man one question. Diane was curious as to why he had not attacked her. When the policeman asked him, he answered, "Because she wasn't alone. She had two tall men walking on either side of her." Amazingly, whether you believe or not, you're never alone. Did you know that 98 of teenagers will not stand up for God, and 93 of the people that read this won’t repost it?

Repost this if you truly believe in God.

If you believe in Jesus Christ put this in your profile and don't just ignore this, because in the Bible it says if you deny me, I will deny you in front of my Father in the gates of Heaven.

Ninety-six percent of teens in the world today don't stand up for God. If you are one of the 4 percent that does put this in your profile.

If you believe in Jesus Christ as your savior put this in your profile and don't just ignore this, because in the Bible it says if you deny me, I will deny you in front of my Father in the gates of Heaven. 96 percent of adults in the world today don't stand up for God. If you are one of the 4 percent that does put this into your profile.