You dead bro? I hope not since I want to read more of this.

This story is fucking AMAZING.

I hope you're doing well! This is so good, with twists and turns and inside jokes. (I loved the meal joke!) I can't wait to read more.

Yeah, I can't stand this SI. It's the doormat of doormats, he's also useless, and everyone who walks all over him is depicted like sunshine and rainbows instead of having even the barest modicum of interpersonal skills. As far as attempts at being funny go, it's one of the worst I've seen.

Add to that the deus ex AI that turns the SI into a meatsuit for an undefined omniscient morality license and all I'm let to feel is regret that I wasted this hour of my life.

Incidentally, Roy's "snap" was anything but, and Shepard and Williams are cunts that don't deserve to be trusted with command of anything.

Roy has to be the most incompetent self insert Ive ever read, he has no plan whatsoever and spends much of the fic running around like an headless chicken. He might as well have just shot himself when he arrived in the mass effect universe for all the good he has done

Very good Fanfic. Once I started reading I could not stopp until I was here. Hopfully you will continue writing it. I liked your writing style here and will look at your other stories too.

Pretty fantastic chap

Pretty fantastic chapt

Pretty fantastic chapter. Well done

Pretty fantastic chapter

Things are getting crazy well done chapter

Pretty excellent chapter. Sad he didn’t sticking around

The most epic chapter yet

Pretty good chapter. 10/10

Another great chap

Pretty interesting chapter