| Reviews for A Pit Viper's Bite |
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   Mrs.HatakePrime chapter 13 . 12/17/2019 ohhh I like this I hope more is to come |
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/21/2018 Bitch yas |
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/21/2018 Holy shat |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/30/2018 Hope this story gets continued hope to read more |
| Girloveshugs chapter 13 . 7/4/2018 Update this story soon please! |
| IGetCaffieneWithdrawals chapter 13 . 6/1/2018 I know this story hasn't been updated in, like, 3 years, but it's really good. So I gotta ask, is this story discontinued? |
| Yoruko Rhapsodos chapter 13 . 5/27/2018 ... "not evil". Sure. I'll buy that never. I hope Jazz goes looking for her, he's her only chance. I never liked or trusted Chris. |
| Griffin fath chapter 13 . 5/24/2018 Plz continue the story I really love it and I love do hope that you continue this story |
| Lokir Anubis chapter 13 . 4/9/2018 Now I really want to see what happens next. Jazz wakes up, sees Prowl, and falls into recharge. Amanda no longer is holding Jazz's Spark and feels empty. I want to know if Jazz remembers and goes looking for her or she goes looking for him. And the shady fighting ring, what happens there? Chris is obviously a controlling shmuck and is trying to drag her kicking and screaming into the Hell when she just barely avoided last time. My brain wants to tell me that it was Jazz who was 3rd in command and it was Prowl who was 2cd in command. I'm not going to pretend that I know everything about Transformers. Because I really can't know. G1 came before my time (along with many other comics, movies, and television) and I don't have the time to keep looking up this kind of stuff. I only learned about Transformers from Netflix and it was Transformers Prime. It's pretty interesting that you made Jazz an Enforcer. He is Optimus Prime's 2cd in command and/or/was head of their Black Ops division. He pushed off all the paperwork and was well beloved by all who knew him(G1 I think). I'm not entirely sure that it was Prowl who was 3rd in command next to Optimus. I do know that he helped to make rules that kept them(other Cybertronians) in line and if no one listened to the rules, he enforced them. You probably know about this, but there is a cite called Transformers Wiki that has a lot of stuff that could help. |
| clueless1164 chapter 13 . 11/15/2017 This is such a good fic, it keeps you guessing even tho there’s only 13 chapters so far! Plus Jazz is just great in general and you can never go wrong with sparkings. Can’t wait for next chapter! |
| xXFrostKittenXx chapter 13 . 10/9/2017 Despite how long it's been since the last update, I'm hoping there's another one coming soon. Great story. |
| WhiteWolf815 chapter 13 . 6/23/2017 Please update soon! This story is wonderful! |
| Bloodwolf776 chapter 1 . 6/11/2017 please update. this story is beautiful and I cant wait for more |
| God is Gracious chapter 13 . 4/28/2017 Oh, poor Amanda. Jazz better go find her |
| Sevvus chapter 13 . 12/28/2016 damn it noooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! why there! i needed more! aw man, i'm dying inside... she needs to not trust chris! and not feel like she should be involved in that kinda thing anyway she has KIDS to thin about now! WHAT IF SHE DIED!? they would be put in danger in more ways then one and SAD cause she died! that's just rude not taking that into account... Ron Weasley says it best. "She really needs to sort out her priorities.." Anyway LOVING THIS...so loki damned much! and I need more of this in my life...preferably soon..but i understand life can be a pain in the butt so, whenever you get the chance...but hopefully soon! I would love to read more! |
