Poll: In, Players In a Game of Magic, what should Dumbledore be like? Vote Now!
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Author has written 4 stories for Harry Potter, and Elder Scroll series. Concept art and notes for my stories can be found at my website: http : / / sites . google . com / site / cyner2u / Just remove the spacing You can find my stories at AO3 under the penname davemats95. Bio: I'm a lifelong brooklynite who loves to read. Honestly I'm too boring to be able to write more than a paragraph about myself. About 'Players in a Game of Magic': The story, as of now, has way too many problems to continue. I essentially made Harry into an overpowered Gary Stu. There's absolutely no room for growth on Harry's part at Hogwarts. If possible, I want to try doing a rewrite where many parts of the story are the same, but Harry ends up using an already established magical system that's much weaker and more limited than wand-magic. By more limited, I want Harry's pre-Wizard101 magic to be so traumatic and time-consuming that using it is somewhat unpalatable. Some of my writing tended towards purple-prose, and that also needs to go. Maybe you'll see a rewrite occurring painfully slowly in the future. |