THIS IS SO GOOD. Oh my gosh, I am so excited to see where this is going and I love Olly as a character so so so much. The way you write her makes her so real and I think that's the most important thing ya knolike to make your characters believable and to give them personality.

As for Tom, given where he is at and how Olly came into the picture ever since he was a baby, I think he's pretty in-character alright. One of the major reasons he turned out the way he was was after all because he never knew of love. Olly is really a good influence on him and I think its possible for one soul to change another souls outlook on things. So tadaaa!

I would love it if you did an Artemis Fowl SI-OC! You could make Artemis or Holly have a twin!

i love Olly’s character so much. and i love how you’re bringing light to things such as racism. it hurts my heart to know people still discriminate others for the amount of melanin in their skin. how anyone can be racist, i don’t know.

I really like this story! I hope you’ll continue this one day since I’m dying to see Dumbledore’s reaction to meeting this new Tom.

Since Tom is no longer seen as a budding psychopath by everyone in the orphanage thanks to Olly than Mrs Cole might not warn Dumbledore about Tom this time around.

Also I’m curious about two things, I was wondering you could tell me if Grindelwald is Olly’s father? Since her mum was always talking about Grindelwald I was wondering if there was more going on between the two.

Also is Cecilia an OC or the same Cecilia from canon the one who was engaged to Tom Riddle Senior before he married Merope Gaunt because canon Cecilia was described as a very cold and rude person and your Cecilia’s personality seems very similar so I was wondering if they were the same person?

Thanks for the chapter~

please update

Bloody hell! It's awesome! I fricking love it! Plz update soon!

mk

Loved this story!

This is one of the best fanfictions I have read. I just love how Olly blends in Tom's childhood. Please update soon, Author!

I will BEG for the next chapter! I'll do it, I will. This is so good I'm almost speechless, absolutly amazing and kind of cute and sweet but also really cool and! Just honestly amazing, I cant communicate it sufficiently.

Oh my god...~ I'm actually crying because of how overwhelmed I am with this damn story! Oh god and it's terrifying that I'm not even fucking lying about this! Oh fuck. I really really REALLY REALLY! ! ! want to fucking verbalize what the fuck I'm feeling right now but I'll leave that for the time I inevitably reread this fic-cause it'll happen no doubt about that! fuck, I'm so fucked.

Gods this is fucking cute.

This fic is so unique and awesome.
10/10
This fic is bloody brilliant.
I love it and I literally can't wait to read more.
Please post more soon

This is quite good! There are a few typos here and there, but the story is excellent and your characters act like adults. Even the racist one.