Still one of the fan fic’s here! I’m amazed how well your storyline flows!

The dialogue in the date with Daphne feels really contrived, like it's your train of thought and now the characters'. It's not bad, and you have Harry's side dish pretty well, but Daphne doesn't have much voice in that section. Sounds like you.

That Hermione is so extreme obsessive, the ridiculous need to know everything. It's very irritating. No privacy.
I wonder why nobody is countering her with asking about her period, her sexual fantasies and color of underwear and the size of her boobs.

McGonagall is not a headmaster, but a headmistress.

Just as good as I remembered it. Thank you for sharing your creativity.

Uhh, nothing wrong with harmless pranks no? Shouldn't he be encouraging it if anything, in honor of Sirius, of whom he even named a kid after? What is wrong with another marauder? Other than that, I loved this chapter, and the entire story really. It was an amazing read!

I really like how you handled Ginny in this chapter. Daphne is viewing things with a particularly Slytherin slant, and while she's probably not really wrong, Ginny probably is not as conscious or deliberate about her motivaions as Daphne makes it sound. That being said, you have Ginny genuinely happy for Harry, trying to be a true friend even when that means reaching out to the woman who might have been a rival. Instead of alienating Harry she gains a friend. I think that's well in line with the girl who has been hurt so badly in her own past and yet gone on to be popular and well liked as she is described in the books.

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Excellent story! Thanks...

This story is amazing. I liked a quite.

good

Great story. I possibly enjoyed the epilogue more than the book - certainly the writing style was a little nicer

This was a well written story. Romance, action and some politics.

I didn’t like the brow beating of Ron, but a lot of it in there was good.

How Voldemort was dealt with was excellent. Snape could have taken him out at anytime.

Recommended.

I liked the story so thanks for sharing

but i still have a question: what about the horcrux in his scar? (unless i missed that part while reading)...

Perfect. Thanks for writing it.