This has been coming for about a month now when I posted the first chapter of this fic and the first reviews came back. So here’s a shout out to some of these people, and if you are wondering why you don’t see your name on this list you will figure out in a minute.

So Zachjames101, Darth Lelouch, BANKAIZEN, Lusalec (you especially. I truly mean that), desdelor97 (you too) TheLordOfFics, blankdead, greer123, The Big Pickle (I’m ify with you).

All of those above, I would just like you guys to know that I have seen and read all of your reviews and they are absolutely less than garbage to me. You have not posted one thing that was helpful or thought provoking and I just want you to know that I really don’t care for you. If you post ‘I like this’ or ‘this is interesting’ on a chapter that isn’t chapter 1, I’m going to be annoyed. I want to know why it’s interesting or what you like about it. That is literally the point of reviews.

And to those of you who have to sign out of your account and post a review as a guest because you want to say to didn’t like it, you are in the garbage with them. If someone posts a review that says they don’t like it, I’m not going to be angry at you and try and fight with them in its defense. At this point I’m pleased because I know that they at least gave some thought into it. I know how to take criticism people. I'm not one of those people that said ‘don’t like, then don’t read’ at the beginning of the story. I will take their criticism and try to do better with it, or I will message them asking them about it if they weren’t specific. AC3Rarin pointed out my spelling and grammar was shit, I then messaged him, I would work on it, and then I got a got a beta reader.

I was bullied in middle school but you know what? It made me learn to not let stuff get personal to me. I don’t care if people I barely know don’t like me. I’m all for bullying. Bully someone because their ugly or fat, I don’t care and they shouldn’t either and that’s the point. To toughen people up. Now it’s different when say, someone is falsely accused of rape and the whole world goes on a man hunt but other than that, just toughen up people. I’m not going to go on a manhunt if you don’t like my story. You want to try to cyber bully me go right ahead, let me give you some stuff to work with.

My fetish is a woman’s legs.

I watch porn on xnxx.

I’m racist against black people because a large majority of them wouldn’t ever leave a proper tip when I was working at Red Lobster. (But you know what? If your black and you walk into Red Lobster, you can bet even the Mexicans who can barely speak english don’t want to be your waiter for the same reason. (We had 4 of those and I learned a lot of Spanish because of them.))

I think abortion is great. Why ruin lives when we are already overpopulated as it is.

Anyone who doesn’t identify as male or female is a attention whore that I will not respect. (To be clear I don’t think changing gender is bad. If you were born a guy and you dress up as a woman and want me to call you miss, I will respect that. You get your dick chopped off and a Vagina sewn on, I will respect that. But if you correct me tell me you are genderfluid, I’m going to instantly hate you.)

I don’t think god is real and if he is I am certain he is a asshole. (Helping free a few thousand Jews from slavery in Egypt when they were losing faith and then leaving millions to be tortured and killed in the holocaust. Sounds like he is only ever going to step in when he thinks people might stop worshipping him).

Yeah I’m a sick fuck. But I’m actually thinking of making this enter rant my bio. That’s how little I care. And to the people that pm me with some stupid question like ‘Is he going to have the rinnegan?’ ‘Why didn’t Yang recognize Blake’ Or anything along those lines. If you actually knew how to read, most of you wouldn’t even be asking me these stupid questions. If you leave a question in the reviews, I might answer it.

(Spoiler alert for any of you who are still here.) Sasukes left eye has been covered/closed since the beginning of chapter 9 and yet I’m still getting people asking if he is going to have the rinnegan. I’m going to just come out and say it. He has the rinnegan but it’s charging before it can be used for the first time.

I’m not doing a goddam harem! I DONT GIVE A SHIT ABOUT YOUR FETISH!!! It’s Yang x Sasuke. If you want to know why, I will get to that in a minute.

You want to know why Yang didn’t recognize Blake? Not only has it been 4 years and I hardly recognize people after 2 but she was wearing a mask and that was said before the fight.

Anyway to those of you who stuck around this long you are probably wondering where chapter 12 is. Well here’s the part where I explain my detailed writing process. When I come to an impasse or decision about the direction my story will take, I do the most complex pros and cons analysis you can possibly imagine, and then promptly ignore them as I flip a coin. I’ve done this several times. The first being deciding if I was going to do Sasuke x Yang because by the time I got to chapter two I realized I had already set it up so that it essentially had to be Sasuke and Yang or no one at all. (Because I wasn’t going to do Ruby). I’ve done this coin toss for basically every decision I’ve made. Join ravens clan? Kill the entire fucking team? Regain his memories a lot earlier than planned? Go to Beacon? Anyway I am currently rewriting chapter 12 because I didn’t like how it turned out so I flipped a coin on whether or not I would rewrite it or post it...

Next chapter is probably coming out tomorrow or today if I get bored. I will take this down in a week or two.