Reviews for Spider-Quirk
Noe Magdiel Gonzalez Ramirez chapter 4 . 7/28
I hope for more
TheVulcanNara chapter 6 . 7/24
So first off I just want to say that this is such an amazing concept that is just so well executed. Like seriously it's phenomenal. Can't wait for him to have access to the support labs and meet mei he should be able to access Karen through the chip in the suit like he did in homecoming since Karin isn't just at the main servers but also mobile inside his suit as well (wasn't sure if you knew that). So if he could remove the suit and then back Karen up onto something that has enough storage (not sure if that would actually be necessary because while yes there is a smaller mobile version of her in the suit her mainframe is technically still in the MCU so she would be karen but limited at first to the suit until he can get her accessed to wifi or the satellite. Their tech and software and firewalls would be absolutely irrelevant for her but Tony did make basically an anti Ultron program in Karen and FRIDAY so that they couldn't hack the government among other things. She just kind if needs a reboot because she's essentially offline and stuck in the suit. Also the Iron Spider Module runs on an Arc Reactor and Solar Power both but can also be charged via pure lightning or energy source or electricity but straight electricity is not recommended due to the sheer amount needed. It mainly uses the arc reactor and cycles in solar power just fyi. After being woken up karen should be able to connect to the internet, satellite, police stations, radio, and cell phones. Not to mention her prime programs all revolve around helping better to be the best hero he can be while also monitoring mental, emotional, and physical health. Also midoriya had his suit made by his mom and could take it from the school and back home whenever he wanted to because it wasn't made by any support companies or had any direct connection to the school until he had the support team remake it after it was destroyed by bakugou so Peter shouldn't technically have to turn in his suit to the school once he is a student because they legally have no rights to it at all. Also both suits don't respond to anyone who isn't Peter or Tony and not just because of karen but because it's specifically coded down to the nanites to recognize only them in every biological and non biological way.) this is all a mix of cinematic canon, comic canon, and cartoon canon facts btw. Just thought I would help out. I really can't wait for what you have next. Thank You!
Guest chapter 6 . 7/11
This is a great story
Taranodongirl1 chapter 6 . 7/6
I love when the adults of the MHA world get so suspicious of Tony Stark. I hope Peter and Izuku will be good friends. I can’t wait for the next chapter.
Lego Marvel Craft Universe chapter 1 . 7/3
This story is absolutely amazy. Please say you will finish it
MetalBatt chapter 6 . 6/26
My boy Tony is rolling in his grave rn. I hope you don't reveal there to be another Tony Stark in this world who's actually evil, because that would be a huge can of worms to worry about! Peter is already having trouble as is, it would be messed up to see him fighting his mentor (;~;)... But yeah man, this is some good fun! Though, I am kind of surprised that the prologue took this long to finish. Glad to see it's over, and now we can get down to business. I'm intrigued to see what you got cooking up in that brain of yours!
MetalBatt chapter 4 . 6/26
The Tony Stark slander by the heroes hurts my soul to the core (;~;)...
MetalBatt chapter 1 . 6/25
Story is really cool so far. But I gotta ask, is there a reason why Tony's name looks seemingly erased? When I was reading through the chapter, anytime it looked like Peter mentioned Tony, his name wasn't there at all. Is it intentional? Or did you accidentally erase every mention of Tony? It's kinda freaky tbh...
FaeGhostReader chapter 6 . 6/25
I hope you continue this.
Lego Marvel Craft Universe chapter 6 . 6/18
I love this story. Pleas continue it. It looks amazing
AverageWeaboo36 chapter 6 . 6/15
Pls update its only getting better and also as constructive criticism you should double check on your grammar and spelling
Guest chapter 2 . 6/10
Great story. One issue i have is the age change. There’s no reason why his body changes to that of a 14 year old, aside from fitting in with class 1A. That right there instantly ejects me from the story. Its really hard to empathize with the characters or believe in any sort of stakes as long as Im consciously aware that somewhere IRL an actual living person is in 100% control over all the events of this fiction. I cant believe in this story anymore and the worst part is it was 100% unnecessary. Tom Holland is a 20 something actor who convincingly played 14 year old Peter Parker. The man looks like he stopped aging at 14. Spiderman had no ID in this new world, with a voice high enough, and a body short enough to identify him as a child. He could have passed for 14. In-fact it would be a tougher sell to convince anyone that he is in-fact 18
Chrisfragger chapter 4 . 6/1
I have one little nit pick, you keep using "your" when you should be using "you're"
Chrisfragger chapter 2 . 6/1
I consider you reverting his age to be a mistake in general... Makes no sense, how did he lose age by coming here? All you are doing is forcing your character to fit into the world better. I would have preferred him to stay his original age. If this were anyone else, I'd probably be taking my leave of this fic, but since Peter was only a couple years older anyway, I will consider giving this fic a little more time.
Chrisfragger chapter 1 . 6/1
President Mic? His name is Present Mic. Just thought I would let you know.
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