updates?

I probably have heard sasuke's story 100 times or more, and it still hits, it's still great. And kiba agrees, lol.
Wow, kokabiel getting some character developtment and exposition? Good, never cared much about him in dxd or slashdog, but this is making him sound better and more interesting as a villain.

Good fight, but i tho sasuke on his current level would do better against those guys, he's still holding back? Anyway good chapter, this last scene was great.

Lol, good end of chapter, and good chapter overral. This fic doesn't get the deserved following and attention. I Like almost all of those characters, including the crossover and oc ones like sasuke and Marietta.

it was the right move. Reading it all again, this chapter was great, the character development and the small changes are were pretty good, tho i wanted saji on the help kiba team, his ausence will not change much or make it worse.

gotta re-read this again from the start, but i remember how much i enjoyed it at first, so ignore the criticism on these reviews, the character development alone would bs enought to make this a good fic. it may don't strongly differ from the canon, but it does differ, and sasuke is being correctly ultilized, also, his presence does affect the universe, it's just doesn't affect too much of it.

ok, i think that's enough. i hope you find some other people who will appreciate this work

you are just copy pasting the original material while adding sasuke in between.

The starting was kinda hard to digest. How can Sasuke compare Naruto to Issei. Issei is piece of crap which goes inside dustbin and thrown outside to get recycled.

LOL, Issei

It seems that Sasuke and Kokabiel is going to duke it out eventually. I'm excited as Sasuke is going to use most of his abilities because it's been lacking in this story, that fight better be good.

I hope Sariel and his daughter die

thats interesting- an antagonist Kokabiel that is more then a two bit shallow warmonger seen in most fics.

Not a bad bit of philosophical introspection.

So far this has failed to impress. Nothing is fleshed out, just repetition of canon. For everything that Sasuke has said, nothing has changed. The actions he's taken mean nothing in the grand scheme, besides that "Excalibur" (pfft.) can't be reforged. Why are the exorcists helping him destroy Excalibur? From that moment, they became traitors to the Church. That fragments of the sword have been destroyed is grounds for the Church to reignite the war. A losing battle that Heaven probably would go into a 50/50 about whether or not to enter. Ultimately, Sasuke has done literally nothing helpful, and despite being an "important character to the story", has had few appearances and contributed nothing to the story other than doom them to another Great War.