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Author has written 2 stories for Divergent Trilogy.

I'm a mathematician and am married with two young children. Nobody knows I'm doing this, but I need something in my life that is for myself alone. Always happy to hear your thoughts. I do a lot of technical writing for work, but this is the first creative writing I've ever done.

My avatar is a map of all the countries from which views of my book have come. I honestly can't believe anybody has read it at all, so it's quite amazing to me. If you're curious, I created the map with the R package rWorldMap.

Update 7/12/2015 Just finished book 1 on Friday, and also posted chapter 1 of book 2 (Memento Mori). It's going to be a week or two before I get back to writing. I wrote book 1 in a six-week binge and I am way behind at work. I'm tenure track at an R1 University. So I don't sleep much. I'm also training for a triathlon. Crazy, no?

Update 8/14/2015 I know it's been a while since I updated. Very sorry. My tri is soon, but I am also gearing up for teaching in the Fall. I will get back to it, though. I promise!

In the meantime, I thought I would explain some of my thoughts about the factions and the some of the characters, because in my books they are a little bit different than in the canon.

Erudite - I love Divergent, of course, but one thing has always bothered me - I wish Veronica Roth hadn't made the intellectuals the bad guys. I'm in academia myself, so of course I am biased, but I really wanted to show readers "old-school Erudite" with the old-fashioned dining room and the beautiful library. That's the real Erudite. Unfortunately, it devolves into arrogance and lack of empathy under the wrong circumstances.

Abnegation - I think of them as ascetics - Buddhist-like, perhaps. It's all about lack of attachment, stripping away of one's ego, and inner peace. It's quite beautiful, of course, but it's not for everyone. And if your heart's not in it, it devolves into fundamentalism and severity. That was Marcus' mistake, I think. I secretly wish I had a bit of Abnegation in me.

Dauntless - They're like the ancient Spartans. My husband is 100% Greek, from Sparta, so I'm very familiar with the mentality. They're brave, fiercely loyal, and nothing goes unsaid. At least - that's what they're supposed to be. When it devolves, it turns into rage and violence.

Tris - The thing about her is that she's still young, still trying to figure things out. She has a dangerous combination of curiosity and impetuosity. She is Abnegation as well, but at least in book 1, it takes a back seat to her other qualities. She has some growing up to do, and that's going to start happening in book 2. Personally, I find sexually timid women to be clichéd and boring, so as you've seen, there's none of that! Plus, in my mind, it really didn't fit with someone who would climb a Ferris wheel, jump off buildings and trains, and so on.

Four - In my mind, Four's got too much Abnegation in him. He doesn't trust himself enough, and he doesn't really believe it's OK for him to desire anything, or want anything for himself. Because of this, he's a bit too easily led, both by Tris and by his mother. Choosing Dauntless was the first major step toward finding his own way, and he's going to take some more steps in book 2. Just to tease you a bit, it's going to be Eric who (inadvertently) leads him to a big revelation.

Eric - He's a sociopath, pure and simple. Incapable of empathy. Jeanine saw him as a perfect plant in Dauntless, because he's violent, but that's because she doesn't understand Dauntless, and doesn't understand sociopathy, probably because she has a touch of it herself.

Zeke - I love Zeke. I knew what was going to happen to him right from the start, but after I started writing him, I really tried to find a way for it not to happen. But it just wouldn't work any other way. Sorry.

8/18/2016 Update

I've been away from the book far too long and I apologize. This past year has been very hard on me. Believe me when I tell you truth is sometimes stranger than fiction. And you don't get to write the ending you want. I'm back now though, and determined to finish these books. After that, I'm planning some original science fiction. So far the title of the book is called "The Seahorse".

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Between Gray And Black by TheZanyBookworm reviews
Beatrice Prior had to be the child that stayed after Caleb left her family for Erudite. Her initiation lasts only a week so her family can recover the loss of Caleb and cope with Erudite's reports. However, when she goes to the train tracks to think about the life she could have had, she meets Four , who gives her an irresistible offer: To be who she wants to become-Dauntless.
Divergent Trilogy - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 35 - Words: 71,668 - Reviews: 998 - Favs: 674 - Follows: 732 - Updated: 8/25 - Published: 12/14/2012 - Tris/Beatrice P., Four/Tobias - Complete
Something New by inopinion reviews
Breaking up is as quick as shattering glass. Getting back together is like gluing each piece in place with cut fingers. Four, Tris, angst.
Divergent Trilogy - Rated: M - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 57 - Words: 304,125 - Reviews: 1060 - Favs: 202 - Follows: 295 - Updated: 6/13/2018 - Published: 11/9/2014 - Tris/Beatrice P., Four/Tobias, Christina, Zeke
Life As Ten by DauntlessProdigy4Life reviews
"Four and Six. Together. Always." Tris has finished initiation and is settling into her crazy hectic life as a Dauntless, complete with her best friends, adrenaline, excitement, and Tobias' love. When they are given positions as Dauntless leaders, they realize they have the power to completely change their world forever and eliminate Divergent hunts. But will they? Fluff/Adventure.
Divergent Trilogy - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 47 - Words: 93,884 - Reviews: 635 - Favs: 442 - Follows: 570 - Updated: 3/28/2018 - Published: 3/15/2014 - [Tris/Beatrice P., Four/Tobias]
With Dauntless Abandon by temporaryinsanity91 reviews
When Tris goes to visit her brother in prison, she sees someone that intrigues her. She is determined to learn his secrets, and he is determined to love her with Dauntless abandon. T for language and some non-explicit sexual content. rating subject to change.
Divergent Trilogy - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 32 - Words: 128,269 - Reviews: 488 - Favs: 490 - Follows: 392 - Updated: 8/25/2016 - Published: 6/1/2014 - [Tris/Beatrice P., Four/Tobias] Caleb P. - Complete
You and me against the world by CloakSeeker reviews
Disclaimer: I do not own the Divergent Series. FourTris prevent the war. But before Jeanine goes down she reveals that Tris is divergent. I will update every two days, since I haven't written to far ahead. If you have questions or suggestions either write a review or PM me. Also, this story is connected to one-shots and drabbles. Follow me as a writer and you'll get all the goodies
Divergent Trilogy - Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 102 - Words: 442,088 - Reviews: 640 - Favs: 425 - Follows: 330 - Updated: 5/31/2016 - Published: 1/13/2015 - [Four/Tobias, Tris/Beatrice P.] Evelyn - Complete
Emergence by selflessandbrave reviews
"I think fear is the most cancerous and incapacitating emotion there is. It eats away at the good inside of us, cripples us from our dreams. But then you find the clarity of hope. I choose hope over fear." / The war is over, and Tris and Tobias try desperately to find happiness in a world where new fears and challenges threaten them. Can they create a life, or will they break?
Divergent Trilogy - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 45 - Words: 56,815 - Reviews: 169 - Favs: 79 - Follows: 95 - Updated: 3/22/2016 - Published: 9/3/2014 - Tris/Beatrice P., Four/Tobias - Complete
Selfless Choices by Cordys-Vision reviews
Abnegation contains my father…but abnegation also contains a fourteen year old blonde girl named Beatrice Prior who sparked a little light inside of me yesterday. I drag the knife along the inside of my palm and hold out my hand between the two bowls. Am I dauntless? Am I abnegation?
Divergent Trilogy - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 39 - Words: 163,882 - Reviews: 693 - Favs: 264 - Follows: 359 - Updated: 3/18/2016 - Published: 8/26/2014
Determinant: One choice will change everything by Windchimed reviews
"Even now, I feel the electrical pull that every touch creates with her. And I know it's unique to her, something I'll never feel with anyone else. I pull away, knowing if I stay any longer I'll never have the strength to do this." Full-length alternate 3rd book with a completely original plot and a very satisfying ending. Works instead of "Allegiant" or after it.
Divergent Trilogy - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Romance - Chapters: 50 - Words: 172,721 - Reviews: 2248 - Favs: 1,180 - Follows: 878 - Updated: 8/15/2015 - Published: 11/2/2013 - Tris/Beatrice P., Four/Tobias, Christina, Uriah - Complete
A Collection of Memories by milner reviews
The sequel to Making a Memory. A complete story presented as a series of one shots that focuses on what happens after Tris and Tobias resume their normal lives and try to make a long distance relationship work.
Divergent Trilogy - Rated: M - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 24 - Words: 67,956 - Reviews: 296 - Favs: 142 - Follows: 95 - Updated: 4/1/2015 - Published: 2/11/2015 - Tris/Beatrice P., Four/Tobias - Complete
Staying Alive by love.eat.write reviews
Natalie and Andrew Prior don't die on the abnegation attack. With Erudite over them and an even worst treath, what will they do?. Will Natalie finally tell her children the truth? Will Tris be as broken and suicidal as in Insurgent with her parents alive? Rated M for smut and lemmons, but this isn't a lemmonly story, it has a plot. Do not read if before Allegiant. Slightly OOC
Divergent Trilogy - Rated: M - English - Family/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 28 - Words: 106,240 - Reviews: 152 - Favs: 109 - Follows: 132 - Updated: 3/14/2015 - Published: 5/27/2014 - [Four/Tobias, Tris/Beatrice P.] [Andrew Prior, Natalie Prior]
Whatever It Takes by milner reviews
"I make my cut, and hold my hand over the cold gray stones without hesitation. I may have an aptitude for two other factions, but I have to do whatever it takes to stay safe." Beatrice Prior chooses Abnegation, and learns her choice isn't what she thought it would be. All characters belong to Veronica Roth.
Divergent Trilogy - Rated: M - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 32 - Words: 86,210 - Reviews: 323 - Favs: 192 - Follows: 135 - Updated: 1/10/2015 - Published: 11/5/2014 - Tris/Beatrice P., Four/Tobias - Complete
Becoming Ten by PaigeLee1981 reviews
Four/Tris. Rated T/M for language and mild adult themes. Tris has faced her fears and stopped a war, but can she over come the ups and downs of Dauntless life? Six and Four will have to find a way to make it work together, if they are ever going to become Ten.
Divergent Trilogy - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 34 - Words: 86,751 - Reviews: 284 - Favs: 361 - Follows: 351 - Updated: 9/21/2014 - Published: 4/27/2014 - Tris/Beatrice P., Four/Tobias, Christina, Uriah - Complete
Forever 10 by ForeverDivergent reviews
This is just a fluffy fanfic about Tris and Tobias' life if there wasn't any war. I know, overused, but these are my favorite fanfics and I decided to try it out. This is my first fanfic so please don't hate. Rated T because it's Divergent.
Divergent Trilogy - Rated: T - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 67 - Words: 93,785 - Reviews: 2212 - Favs: 822 - Follows: 880 - Updated: 8/30/2014 - Published: 3/14/2013 - Tris/Beatrice P., Four/Tobias - Complete
You Saved Me by milner reviews
A little pre-Divergent/Divergent story. What if Beatrice and Tobias knew each other in Abnegation? What happens on Tobias' choosing day? Will he choose to stay with Beatrice or go out on his own? Mostly original content. Slightly ooc. All characters belong to Veronica Roth.
Divergent Trilogy - Rated: M - English - Romance/Suspense - Chapters: 37 - Words: 92,429 - Reviews: 527 - Favs: 508 - Follows: 412 - Updated: 6/2/2014 - Published: 3/14/2014 - Tris/Beatrice P., Four/Tobias - Complete
Three Parts Dead by LolaBleu reviews
He kisses my lips and then each of the four birds tattooed under my collarbone, lingering a little longer on the newest one; the one closest to my heart; the one that represents him. Post-Insurgent/Tris' fear of intimacy.
Divergent Trilogy - Rated: M - English - Romance/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 22 - Words: 107,976 - Reviews: 703 - Favs: 1,402 - Follows: 906 - Updated: 5/3/2014 - Published: 11/12/2012 - Tris/Beatrice P., Four/Tobias - Complete
Killing Four by wee kraken reviews
Four is dead. I've killed him. He was an ideal, a Dauntless prodigy that never really existed. INSURGENT FOUR POV - starting in Candor. Spoilers, obviously.
Divergent Trilogy - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 31 - Words: 68,908 - Reviews: 680 - Favs: 453 - Follows: 395 - Updated: 10/3/2013 - Published: 5/15/2012 - Four/Tobias, Tris/Beatrice P.
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Hamartia: Memento Mori (Book 2) reviews
"I have been fighting and drowning for what seems like years, centuries even. But I am awake now. I don't know where I am. I can hear Tris now. She's telling me not to die. I want to, though. What did she call me? I remember now. Four. I used to be Four." Four and Tris find themselves and their way back to each other in this sequel to Hamartia.
Divergent Trilogy - Rated: M - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 10 - Words: 18,918 - Reviews: 75 - Favs: 52 - Follows: 95 - Updated: 8/17/2016 - Published: 7/10/2015 - Tris/Beatrice P., Four/Tobias, Uriah, Shauna
Hamartia (Book 1) reviews
Beatrice Prior follows her brother to Erudite, but yearns for a different life. She meets Four after watching them all play Capture the Flag. When the attack on Abnegaton begins, who will Tris be able to trust? And will Four be able to trust her? Love, trust, heartache, and betrayal - it's all here. This is book 1 of a planned trilogy.
Divergent Trilogy - Rated: T - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 38 - Words: 62,456 - Reviews: 158 - Favs: 91 - Follows: 81 - Updated: 7/10/2015 - Published: 5/17/2015 - Tris/Beatrice P., Four/Tobias, Shauna, Zeke - Complete