The spelling needs a bit of work but good story so far :)

oh my God...I've just finished that was amazing why did it have to end (but it ended in a good place) I feel like I've been living in another world for the past 3 day :,))

I loved this so much. You're such a good writer.

for my complete review of the entire story, please see my review for chapter 100.

i enjoyed this story. it's a "no war" story that does have a few mysteries & adventures, but it's not action-packed. mostly day-to-day activities. a couple of things i found OOC (out of character), but that's the writer's prerogative. one person complained about reading "too much smut", and while it's not my favorite thing to read (mostly because it's not reality, no one has mind-blowing sex like that all the time), all you have to do is skip that paragraph or two & continue on. that's what i did. she rate it "M" for a reason! i did get tired of all the "i love tris" and "i love you tobias" because i also feel it's not reality. but this is her story & she can write it the way she wants. so just sit back & enjoy!

The little guy finally arrived!

Good chapter.

Nope, does not deserve forgiveness (imo). It's like a murderer asking for forgiveness on death row. Nope.

Can't wait for the next chapter to have answers to all those questions!

Yes, I think they will catch Edward and I hope they put him under the truth serum to find out what happened to turn him into such a cruel person. Although I can probably figure it out, it would still be nice to hear it come from him.

Now that was announcement I was hoping for.

I know you said you were gonna do either a pregnancy or a wedding, but this is not the couple I thought of for either of those things.

Nah - don't believe it. People like Marcus don't change that quickly.

I have no doubt that Marcus will not be alive to "meet" his grandson.

Well that was an interesting chapter.