amazing I need more.

I cried reading the 1st chap
Amazing di

I loved that story and enjoyed every chapter, well written, it's a very interesting plot from the start with Tobias spending time outside the fence in Milwaukee, his love lady in waiting having now disappeared into thin air, Tris' slow recovery back to health, Chicago messy status since the war's ended.. Challenging times indeed for them all ! I almost laughted at Caleb being effectively factionless or nicer even an outcast !.. ah ah it served him right after what he did - I am delighted Tris made it back to Dauntless despite all her injuries but her perseverance paid off at last. Both Tobias and Tris have a mountain to climb to resolve this latest impasse between all factions and satisfy all greedy demands... they work best together as a team so as long as they put their stubborness aside and combine their efforts, i am positive they will get there with some compromises along the way... their main aim is also to get past this to spend more time together... i hope you will find the time, motivation and inspiration to keep going with this story, i for one look forward for any updates as and when you are able to. Thanks. Keep well and stay say everybody.

Gosh, I love this story. I wish you'd continue. :(

Found this story by fluke (yes) book whilst browsing online .. and loved it! was so thirsty for more that i read the chapters in a matter of days! I so so hope you will find the motivation and inspiration to finish it, the characters are excellent, the writing is equally as delightful. I love the plot behind the factions and how you relate to their past that we are all familiar with as well as trying to move forward as a society and a city. The relationship between Tris and Tobias is very vulnerable, volatile and hard to piece back together but deep down they care and love each other, life gets in the way as more often than not but they pursue their dream on wishing to be together as a couple which is where they belong. They all have been through so much and you have depicted their respective emotional status very well whether it's Zeke with having lost Uriah or Shauna having lost her sister etc.. Well done.

Will you ever finish this story? I used to love it :)

Finally! Lol, I like that she took control but you included the basic Male urges

I NEED more! I’ve reread the entire series.

What a shame , if I new you would not going to finish thise story I wouldnt read it , I thought you were serius writing this amazing story :(

Omg Tris ! , she is so stupid I really wish if Tobias move on and find a good girl who deserve him, I dont understand why everyone victimized Tris when its obvious everything that happen to them its because she , atg , I dont really like when Tobias its with another girls but in this case I would be happy if he find some one else. Sigh , what a nice story , you are amazin, thank you

I hate Tris cause everything its been happen to Four its all her fault, she doesn't deserved him, I dont even understand why she was so mean to him, what was the reason that make her pulled him out of her life? Its that because she just wanted to enjoy another guy, she its not broken she its just a stupid litlle bitch, I really hope Tobias never come back to her, SIGH! well by the way love this story and you are awesome I really hope to find more stories of yours thank you.

Please update this fabulous story. I need to know what happens next for our favorite duo.

I need more! Sooo good!

Interesting

YES YES CHRISTINA YES 100 AGREE WITH YOU TRIS IS SO DIFFERENT ITS FREAKING SCARING ME