Good story.

this was a good chapter!

Wow :) this is fabulous! I read the whole thing in one sitting - guess that shows how "into the story" I get! D Your writing is clear, easy to follow, and tremendous at describing the exciting events in your story! Now I'll never be able to look at that awkward lad in Prince Caspian the same way again ;)

Great job - you should write more Narnia fanfic :)
Tiriel

Okay internet up again and I finally finished this chapter. I liked it a lot and it was sweet and funny- images with sound. A.E. laughed. Sorry A.E can't comment- very tired just stayed awake to read the chapter. Passed out now.(Or so OM thinks. Just to say loved it and.. yawn.*sleepy blink* sleep well.;-) )
TLAD

Too interested must press next, can't do a long review, just know that me an A.E love it.
TLAD

Firstly, poor king of Tisroc. I felt so sad (OM's always so emotional. ;-) ) Secondly almost died when she walked away from Caspian, but now that I know that there will be Suspian moments up ahead I am so happy. (Yay for maybe Suspian sexy times! Even if that's not so appropriate who cares! They should get- ;-) ) Ignore A.E. Looking forward to Suspisan.
TLAD

(Hilarious! I LOVE SUSPIAN and the faint was fantastic, ROTFL! But now what will Robert do. OOH! ;-) )
Thanks for the P.M, I LOVE the story so far, so I couldn't stop pressing next, but now I have to review and say I love it.
TLAD

Alright, things just got serious, I shall read on! I am so excited! Ya! (OM went a little overboard but I also feel the same so ONWARDS! ;-) A.E)
TLAD

(That b*tch, what is she up to? Ho! Okay officially intrigued. ;-) Alter ego) Sorry about A.E's outburst. This is good and there's more to read. Yay.
TLAD

What happens to Lucy?

I loved this story! I didn't know you'd completed it until today so I've read it from chapter one again. Is there another Narnia story in the pipeline? I just have one query about this story... did Eric ever find love?

i love it! i hope you become a major writer in the future

:)

um...question please.? who exactly is Sarah? is she the antagonist?

Well, like I said I would, here I am, being super freaky and annoying by commenting xD I liked that it was pretty much the book itself but it also had thos few elements apart from the original story that I loved, like Susan getting into the fight and then the soldier. Awesome.

I know it's suuuuper late but i just want to tell you that I really loved your story, it moved my heart beyond words and I seriously seriously think this is a great story. Thanks for the chapters. Like a lot. *pushes her aside* OH MY FUCKING GOD! THIS WAS SOOOOO FREAKING AWESOME! *u_u* I MEAN FJDKSLAFJASÑFJASÑJAFJDSÑAJFÑ because it's everything I can say right now, I'm pretty speachless.

Be warned, i'll probably comment now each chapter, because it was so fucking awesome. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.

(Sorry, sometimes she gets a little carried away, but she is right though, WE WILL COMMENT)

Seriously girl, I loved it )