Author has written 1 story for Inuyasha. "Choosing the Brides" is my first fanfic. I'm hoping for some criticism. I need to know where to change it and how to make it better.I've always had bad experience with writing stories and this is no different. It's always best to have some constructive criticism. The characters are based on those in Inuyasha, well most of them will be. I will probably have a lot of characters in it. Kagome and Sango are the only important characters that I have SO FAR, but I promise there will be more. It seems that making up the theme of the story isn't hard for me, but when it comes to actually writing the story it's harder. It took me a long time to begin the story. I don't think anybody is going to read this. I wouldn't, but I felt like writing all this. I think I had an idea of what to write on my Bio, but that came to me when I was going to sleep and I just forgot all about it. All my ideas seem to come when I go to sleep and I'm sure to forget all that I thought up at night. This idea happened to pop up at night too, but I made it my job to remember. I guess I succeeded. Pardon me for using dimwitted words. I feel like a junior high kid. This is not what I really wanted to write, but I think my brain decided to settle in for tonight and I felt I just had to type up all of this. I read a lot more stories than I put on my 'favorites' list. Other than Inuyasha, I also like Ranma 1/2, Prince of Tennis, Hikaru No Go, Saint Tail, Fruits Basket, Candidate for Goddess, Angel Sanctuary, D.N. Angel, Fushigi Yuugi, Detective Conan, Hoshin Engi, Marmalade Boy, and more. Marmalade Boy is so sad, but the ending was a good one. The ending was so funny. I can't believe they thought they were half-siblings. They went through so much, but they finally ended up together. =) That's all for now. |
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