hahahahh what a dilema , she really fell for it ? i don't care but it is an amazinng fanfic ,really go on ...love your story.

I think it is total BS when authors get InuYasha and Kagome together last but engaged first. That ticks me off to no end. Ayame and Kouga were together first and in a relationship before the others, yet InuYasha and Kagome do it first. I hate that. Kagome really is a self-centered B****! The story was entertaining, but it did strengthen my HATRED for Kagome. I hate that character. I she hadn't begged like a whiney baby to go with Ayame and Sango in the first place, she wouldn't have been with InuYasha or anything. I would have told Kagome "HELL NO!" *sigh* I am so tired of Kagome always getting what she wants through manipulation.

Man I hate Kagome. Ayame is right - she is selfish, always has to have her way and when things don't happen the way she wants them - ie. InuYasha kissing her - she acts like a total b****. Kagome deserves to be alone and it stinks that all guys want her.

I loved it.

nice story. pretty cute

I would just like to let you know that this is one of my favourite Inu fics on this site :). It's just such an enjoyable read! I had started reading it when you had completed it the first time around and when I was going up north for two weeks I actually printed out the chapters so that I could finish it there and not have to wait until I got back. Thanks for posting!

Totally loved this story! :)

really good i would never have expected a air balloon

but i hava a question i would like answered

i hope u can answer it

HOW DO THEY USE THE WASHROOM?

that has been on my mind please answer me

p.s i love the whole thing with the coke

Very cute. I can't to read your sequel. Ja ne!

awsumeness!

I have to say that I have no idea what this story is about and that it is quite possible that it has the best plot ever written. However, I cannot read it as it simply contains too much of what my beta has termed "fangirl Japanese." I can understand the use of unique Japanese terms such as "youkai," "hanyou," etc., and even the suffix titles such as "-kun" and "-chan." What I cannot tolerate, however, is the use of "hai" or "iie" which we have perfect equivalents for in English. Since you are writing in English, you really should refrain from including snippets of other languages in your story - it makes the plot smoother and much more believable. I'm glad that you have so many avid fans and readers, but I'm sad to say that I cannot join them (especially after reading some of the reviews - they say that your story is really funny). Anyway, I hope my constructive criticism did not offend you or deter you from writing. :)

Great story! I loved it!

Its one of my faves!

Keep writing! Your great :]

i loved it . found it this morning!

) ja

wait! what does Mujaki mean?

this is GREAT iloved it