Howdy! I'm Abyssal Phantom and when it comes to writing, I'm pretty decent, but obviously not the best. Where I tend to shine is cause and effect, misdirection, and world building. Sadly, due to my heavy inexperience, these skills aren't as refined as I wish they were. I'm very creative and I enjoy brainstorming story ideas that pop into my head and thinking the whole idea through. I'm a hard working person who sees things through to the end and I have a strong desire to improve, so any criticism would be helpful, it can be harsh or soft, it doesn't matter, I will take it in earnest and appreciate it anyway, since it will be helpful in furthering my abilities. I believe that a character should always be accurate, and any personality changes within the story should have a good reason.

Oh, by the way, I try to upload every other week, although exams are currently putting a heavy strain on even that.

Ability of The Acute Dragon (In Progress) = Izuku has a quirk that has affected him since birth, it makes him very acute and gives him the ability of a behemoth of a dragon. He isn't aware of this however, in fact, no one is, but i'm sure he'll figure it out pretty quickly. He's smart but not omniscient, he needs to know things before he can come to a conclusion, but he does have the ability to gain and use that knowledge, so he'll probably be fine...

Ch 1 (rewritten) 3hrs writing and 4hrs revising (Ver.1 terrible)

Ch 1 (rewritten) 6hrs writing and 2hrs revising (Ver.2, bad)

Ch 1 (uploaded) 13hrs and 3hrs revising (Ver.3, current and pretty decent)

Ch 2 (uploaded) 4hrs writing, 2hrs revising and 2hrs researching (I don't like this chapter. It feels poorly made, but i can only blame myself)

Ch 3 (uploaded) 7hrs writing, 1hr revising and 30mins researching

Ch 4 (uploaded) 5hrs writing and 2hrs researching

Ch 5 (uploaded) 8hrs writing, 50mins revising and 1hr researching (For some reason this chapter was annoying to make)

Ch 6 (uploaded) 6hrs writing, 40mins revising (Thankfully this chapter went really smoothly. Yay!)

Ch 7 (uploaded) 7hrs writing, 2hrs revising and 1hr researching (This chapter was annoying... and tiring, but not as bad as Ch 5)

Ch 8 (uploaded) 15hrs writing, 3hr revising and 30mins researching (I had so little time to write this, and even after all the time i put into it, it's still bad)

Ch 9 (uploaded) 4hrs writing, 1hr revising and 30mins researching

Ch 10 (uploaded) 2hrs writing, 2hrs revising and 20mins researching

Ch 11 (uploaded) 7hrs writing, 2hrs writing and 3hrs researching

Ch 12 (uploaded) 3hrs writing, 1hr revising and 30mins researching (The last 4 chapters went smoothly and came out well. Yay!)

Claim (Pretty cool idea) = Izuku can, to keep it vague, use a different form of All for One. His version is more friendly and in some regards is weaker, but in other regards is stronger. He calls it 'More for One'. (I have actually thought this story idea through, but I'm just currently being very non-specific)

Ch 1 (haven't started yet)

Animosity (Good, but challenging idea) = Izuku's quirk is called "Writhing Wrath". It makes him feel an intense and fierce hate for everything and he can physically manifest this hate into powerful abyssal tendrils of pure anger. He used to be kind, he still is, it's just it feels like an act now, because of the immeasurable amount of hatred he secretly feels. He doesn't like the way he feels, but in his heart he still thanks the man that gave him his quirk and his chance to become a hero.

Ch 1 (haven't started yet)

Tenacity (In progress) = Izumi is Izuku's twin sister, and she has been gifted since birth. With her being a natural genius and getting a powerful fire based quirk at the age of four, she had always been popular with others, although Izuku himself wasn't so fortunate. He sadly was not as bright as his sister, moreover he got a quirk that no doctor knew how to activate or let alone understand, leaving him to be forever in his sister's shadow. Although, the twins from a very young age were very close, with an incredibly strong desire to become heroes, and izuki wouldn't let his less than desirable circumstances stop him from becoming one, so instead he trained tirelessly, every single day, from a young age.

Izuku was commonly considered to be weak by others since his quirk was unknown, so consequently he was treated as if he were quirkless. katsuki bakugou was a friend of the twins, and she even shared the dream of becoming a hero with the twins, but when she realised that her best friend had so little power compared to others, she knew that he wouldn't be able to become a hero, and would only get hurt, so she resorted to detering him, with increasingly physical methods, causing the friendship to quickly be left in the past. Every day she regrets her actions, but continues nonetheless, all because she cares.

Ch 1 (uploaded) 3hrs writing and 30mins revising

Ch 2 (uploaded) 5hrs writing and 30mins revising

Ch 3 (in progress)