Loved the story, it’s a shame it’s dead.

Fuck me mate, loved the new changes, specially Big hot and angry.

Fuck me in the ass, this chapter was beyond great, you gave Isuku the spot light while still holding Bakugo and Todoroki in a high pedestal, Love how era user head also had a more prominent role. This has to be the best interpretation of this arc I’ve seen in fics. Great job

Dunno what you talking about, the story is good so far, granted his power alone would have been more than enough without adding one for all to the mixed, I thought that you would have hold on giving one for all until much more later, it would have been fun seeing him compete against the like of Miro in order to prove himself. His quirk is simply amazing, I love it. The only issue I see is how Op his becoming in comparison to his classmates

Am I the only one who noticed he was saying the same thing as Vali from DxD was saying to Issei in season 2?

You actually didn’t change anything. OfA was never a physical ability booster, but rather a unique stockpile quirk. The energy from the stockpile in the normal universe could theoretically already be used to augment quirks

lol canon One for All has that power

Says he watches to much fate and got inspiration from ulquiora fight but that is from bleach

Just finished the battle with Muscular. SO GOOD!

Update you idiot or I will deep fry in hot acid

Great story! But update...? Sooo long.

The premise for your story is sound. Izuku's quirk is interesting, albeit the quirk itself or perhaps your portrayal of it seems inconsistent at times. As well as Izuku's personality, which feels like your split between trying to stay true to his original character but also make him a more confident version. Which is all well and good, however you flip from one personality to the other so frequently it's a little jarring.

for the quirk I would say to try and keep things more consistent with it in comparison to the amount of supposed effort your MC has put in. there have also been frequent use of calling his quirk magic which, in the world of BNHA is out of place. I get where you are coming from but with out proper explaination or introduction to the concept of a magic system in your story it just seems... off putting.

as for your actual writing, could use work or perhaps a beta to reinforce your message. there are far to many uses of author notes which break the flow of reading. often in place where you could've simply written out a zshort scene. in those cases it seems like lazy writing.
time skips or rather the page break of a time skip is also very jarring. when one could simply write out that some months have passed with a short description of what occurred.

in short, the story has alot of potential, but is hard to read due to the many relatively minor and in a few cases major issues with the general writing and pacing.

Why does Izuku still act nervous and has no experience talking to girls if he hasn't been bullied in childhood and was probably popular? Shouldn't he be more confident?

honestly I'm really starting to dislike this midoriya. even with 10 years and a quirk he seems to doubt everything about his abilities and seems to be afraid to stand out. I mean seriously he didn't seem to care in middle school but now he is afraid his classmates will isolate him if he goes all out.

And even after all that training he can only fight for a few minutes. What the hell? There goes any supposed growth.

At least the clash between Muscular and Izuku was epic.