| Reviews for How Eating a Strange Fruit Gave Me My Quirk |
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MetalHound93 chapter 14 . 15h Inko and allmight... I SHIP THEM! HAHAHAHA |
QuestionableOne chapter 19 . 7/17 Well, I've enjoyed reading this story so far, but there are some parts that worry me. You are walking a thin line between Izuku and Luffy characters. Not sure if you wanted Izuku to be a mix of Luffy and himself, but just saying that if this was a crossover with Luffy taking the place of Izuku, you wouldn't have to change much. The power, the hero costume, hero name, and the laugh? A bit much I'm afraid. Thankfully the attacks do not start with gum gum... Also is there a reason why Izuku won't tell anyone he is technically quirkless and got his power from a fruit? Not sure how that information would be harmful especially if he just withhold information about OFA. |
RyanPhoenix chapter 19 . 7/15 This chapter had everything, action, drama, suspense, humour, intensity and a little romance, I can't wait for your adaptation of Two Heroes. |
X chapter 19 . 7/10 Can't wait for the next chapter, hope you add Melissa in the harem. |
Slavish chapter 19 . 7/10 Nice story! I just started to binged this when I saw it on someone else story and it really has a nice background to it. This story is like tied for first for my favorite MHA fanfic not beating out or losing to a Kingdom Hearts story I found. I like how the DF after getting suggested to fuse with OFA just was like ooooooh I have friends to play this game with now. |
BoredKing chapter 17 . 7/9 This whole encounter with Satin is ridiculous, cool fight but the whole situation shouldn't even be happening. Izuku can use a lot more OFA than he could in canon, enough that he should be able to drop an non enhanced human opponent (which Stain is) easily either through brute strength or speed. You've made what should've been a skilled but human opponent into someone who can perform feats of strength and speed that only someone with an enhancement type quirk should be capable of and it cheapens the whole story. Here's a tip, don't arbritqril6 buff or nerf your characters. If you want an interesting fight then set circumstances that would allow the fight to happen how you want. Like say Stain took some type of super drug or Izuku is so weak because he was exhausted before the fight began. |
Alexis chapter 19 . 7/8 C est une histoire intrigante et incroyable je suis extrêmement impatiente pour la suite J adore que izuku a la relation avec 4 filles car c c'est pas un vrai harem mais c est extrêmement intéressante de voir ce type relation |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/8 Not gonna lie I would have liked if it was any other devil fruit instead of rubber one |
Guest chapter 19 . 7/5 Hi I'm a big fan of your stories and enjoy reading alot of them but this is the first time I actually give review in any story. So just saying that keep up the amazing work |
Tomon chapter 19 . 7/6 You sure packed a lot into this chapter :) And now even the I-Island? Looking forward to it, even if I wonder if it won't be weird if several classmates manages to appear, especially the girls without discussing it at all :-D Thanks for another good chapter. |
Oghenevwogaga chapter 19 . 7/3 I'll watch this. |
Dauntes chapter 7 . 7/1 Hey dude, thanks for this story really enjoy it as well as this chapter, the action is fun and surprisingly easy to follow. That being said, I don't know if you've fixed this by now since this is chapter 7 out of 19 but your use of names can be confusing as hell. You occasionally switch between first and last, and then you often misspell the names, or confuse them IE Shota when you mean Shoto. There were a number of times you referred to Shigaraki as Shiratori. I can't even imagine how hard it is to write such an involved story with so many characters and I'm assuming foreign style names to you, but I wanted to make a point to at least mention the issue as it can get pretty confusing/disjointing for the reader. Again, if this has already been addressed resolved, sorry to bring it back up. Thank you very much again for the story, I genuinely look forward to catching up to the newest chapter! |
Guest chapter 17 . 6/30 Analytical criticism: i think this chapter and a few other chapters, there have been spellings of both Shota (Aizawa) and Shoto (Half Ice n half fire Boi) that have been mixed up. You say one thing that Aizawa would be doing, but uses Shoto’s name. Word usage could be used better as there are words that are repeated twice in a sentence when only one of those words would suffice. Otherwise, It’s an amazing story, so keep it up! |
DeadKnot chapter 1 . 6/30 when i read "izuku's arm stretched..." oh i'm out. |
Jaredpjm chapter 3 . 6/30 Ah, I sometimes miss playing Destiny 2, but I can’t really handle all the new stuff |