Shouldn't Izuku's quirk be like; being able to release a gas from his skin which he them combusts into fire? Just an idea.

keep going bro

Pls more chapters :(

I wish my broccoli child had green hair and had love

Are you ever going to pick this back up? I really enjoy it

Is it just me... or do you think the ship should be mellisa x izuku? Haven’t heard the name so I’m guessing it’s... izusa? Meliku? Idk but it’d be really cute

So he's going to look like a trafic light...

Please update this story

I was really hoping that it would’ve reached UA at least, but I hope the story continues to be updated as it is really interesting, so nice work

thebeastlystuff Does this story finish or in hiatus

Please update I love this story

Well, good luck with the rest of your story. While i have enjoyed it i don't really like the Izuku is a coward bit.

So, when you're writing, you have s bad habit of just making blank statements. "Izuku did this" "Izuku went there" "Izuku thought that" see what i mean. Instead of just blandly staying what is going on, actually tell the story. So, take, "Izuku ran to school" and turn it into, "Sprinting as fast as his legs could carry him, Izuku bathed in the almost foreign feeling of being outside as he enjoyed every sight and sound on the way to school."

Of course, that doesn't have to be every sentence, but it would make the story not feel so dry.

Just to be clear, I'm enjoying the story and it has a great premise. I can't wait for him to get to cannon. I sorta think you need to look into growth charts though because unless he has a size quirk too then he's waaaaaay too tall for 8.

Red, green and yellow hair? That's a bit much i think. Some personal opinions, having Izuku remember midnight's visit rather than always thinking about All Might would've been good for the story. He could describe it as his happiest day or feeling an unexplained connection. Also, your charters all sound the same. The dialogue is flat, by which i mean, none of the characters speach seems unique to them.

While the quirks her had aren't bad i wish you'd have simply blended them. They're just do random i don't see them working well together.

Can't wait for the next chapter