Author has written 3 stories for Twilight. Hello there. I'm Rachel, Ray, Rachie, any and all. I'm 14 years ago, so bear with me. I write a lot, a little too much, actually. Mostly Twilight and original stories these days, but I used to have a thing for Artemis Fowl & InuYasha. I watch a few anime shows, but I'm mostly over that one. I'd like to think I write pretty well, but I'm absolutely in lovee with constructive criticism, so lay it on me. 8D I'd like to point out the difference between constructive and, um, for polite purposes, we'll call it 'cynical,' criticism. Constructive: I like the story line, but you should be more descriptive, grammatical, etc. 'Cynical': THIS STORY SUCKS. I HATE YOU AND I HATE THE WORLD. emosob Try and keep that in mind, please and thanks. x3 And I have a thing for Lucky Charms. Leave it alone. . |
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