Try making Draco more guarded, and don't let him be nice all of a sudden. Try reading Clean by olivieblake . ( s/11720199/1/Clean)

Great job! This is super cute

Aaaawwww! I know it's a one shot but I love the way they interact. I want to read again about your version of Draco and Hermione. '

What a sweet and romantic sketch! And the umbrella helped!

Okay, that was really, really cute, and not just because I'm a sucker for romantic moments under umbrellas. Coupled with Dramione, that just made it all the better.

You had a lot of factors to put in, and although they stuck out to me since I was on the look-out for them, they were woven into the story pretty well. (Although, my gut reaction is to question whether Reese's as a non-magical candy would have reached Hogwarts, but its absence is too much a darn shame that I prefer to think that they're able to share in the awesome candy).

Thanks for the lovely read! :)

I wish there were more Dramione stories on your profile, you write them well.

Cute! Wish it was longer

Loved this, just wish that there was more of it! ;o)

Sweet & fun!

Oh, this is so cute. Loved it. Only complaint: I wish, it was longer! ;)

That's it? Aah~ I thought there's be some more, but this is already cute

Oh my my, is perfectly!)

So sweet! Made me smile the entire time I was reading it.

aww that was pretty cute. thanks for this fanfic.

lovely!