You have such a way with Patrick and Teresa - it is so sweet and gentle and sad. I love this story.

So sweet thanks for the very nice read

Ah. I just can't. Dx This just too much perfect. In the nearly-said manner, you put all their longings and issues out and agh, I'm melting in a bittersweet puddle. Thank you so much. This is a definite favorite of mine.

Love it:)

Deft touch. In many other hands it would be either too sweet or too clumsy. Nicely done (even if it was an excuse for Lisbon to risk giving Jane a heart attack by patting his vest down). Thanks for the enjoyment.

wow... so cuuuute!:)

Wow. I loved this. You write realistically, capturing the personality of both of these characters so beautifully (especially Lisbon's). I can totally imagine this happening between them-which is the important thing. Thanks so much.

Very sweet and fun :)

Beautiful, in character, great writing! Loved it!

Aww, that was adorable! Love when Jane tries to cheer Lisbon up. And did he plan for her to go searching all over his person or was that just a surprise, but welcome, side effect?

I think my favorite part was the end, where she's hidden the card with an origami frog and the hammer. Love that you mentioned both the frog and the hammer-two of my favorite Lisbon items. :D

And had Jane chosen the queen of hearts on purpose? ;)

Please write more soon!

Awn... so cute!

hello :D well that was a really good fic, its pretty lovely ... as the moment i read it one idea come to my mind , but well we maybe talk about later

its great the fic, i love when jane make smile lisbon

jisbon at the power xD

This was charming.

You most certainly should not be sorry about anything in this story! I loved how you turned their game into such crackling tension, and then gave us such a sweet finish. Perfect!

LOVED IT SO MUCH OMG!