Wow, khaki fever is really interesting! i really enjoyed this short story! Have you written any books and are they published because i would totally read them. I also really liked your story about Finn, i just adore Enna Burning! Anyways, you should check out my story "close to you" it's about Finn and Enna as well.

hah, awesome:D. if you're willing to tell me more about it then i would love to know...

Ferdinand is not Alek's last name. it says so in Goliath.

just thought i'd let you know!

Although I am barely into the second book, I think you captured Deryn's character perfectly. I've actually heard of Khaki Fever, but it's been awhile. Clever, clever idea. :)

The last line is my favorite line in this, but it's such a spoiler to me (well, I knew it was going to happen, but still. XP)

Yes! You've gotten around to writing some of your own! Glad to see it. ;)

Anyways, I absolutely love this. ;D I've never heard of this 'khaki fever', so I'm glad I got to learn a little about history as well as enjoy a wonderfully written piece of fanfiction! Deryn's response to the reporter was completely perfect, and I loved the whole thing.

I hope to see more from you in this section, and I can't wait until I do!

I've heard of kahki fever before. A good enough explanation for what Deryn was doing if I could think of one. Incorrect, of course, but fitting.

Interesting little look at that phnomenon! I like seeing a little bit more history mixed in with my steam/diselpunk. But not enough to do away with the flying whales and huge mechas. No, no, no.

-P.W. Bing

Well, I already told you I liked it, but I'll say it again: Well done, my dear, well done indeed! :D

(I'll confess, I didn't know what khaki fever was until I read this, so thanks for teaching me something, too!)

That. Was. AWESOME. it made me laugh SOOOO hard!

Oh, brilliant story! I've seen you leaving reviews all over this section and glad you've stepped into the fray yourself. Really good idea- and it's a fic with HISTORICAL ACCURACY. /fans herself

Really fantastic, keep it up!

Side note: Deryn's first post-reveal interview being with Malone made me laugh really hard, because all I could think was, "Adela Rogers would kill her." Seriously, the girl keeps missing out on the big scoops!