Long time Star Wars fan & I loved this chapter!...TY for the laugh.

I'm not sure if I'm just really tired but this had me in tears.

What an excellent series of short pieces. I usually prefer longer, connected stories, but I may have to change my mind, courtesy you. Thank you for writing them.

Horrible and effective.

Au contraire, you have Lisbon very much in character. Lisbon fights Jane's deflection and lies with up front truth. Nice job.

Nice piece from Rigsby's POV. Thanks.

Uh,hello DemonClowSorceress,I just want you to know that this is really really awesome!Uh,I really don't know what to say,but I hope you will write ,GOODBYE for now!

WONDERFUL story. Reading this really made my evening. Thanks for posting!

OMG OMG OMG! I never even found teresaxpatrick stories before yours. You've opened up a whole new world for me! To be honest i havent read them all yet but for the ones i have read were so great and real! They were fluffy at the right times and more trust based at the right times so it was realistic. Great work :). You are a really great writer and this was such a good idea. Btw i love this show 3

Lovely ending.

I loved them all. Really made me laugh, cry - the whole shebang.

Thanks.

:)

Ah, I finally got a chance to read this and I must admit I'm sad to see this 50 things thing end. It's been an awesome ride and I will miss it a lot. Then again, I can always come back and re-read it all ;-)
Thank you for this beautiful ending and all the 50 Things!

I've really enjoyed this story! I think the ending was very sweet. Great job!

Awwwww...it's called love, Jane, and even *you* can't control when it hits! You can fight it, avoid it, deny it, laugh it away, but even you are susceptible.

loved this. not the her-getting-shot part, his reaction to it. And his reaction to his reaction. I also love the idea of Jane picking up her gun and taking out the bad guy *himself*! Trying to picture that...

liked these-
-Jane's rationale had been in question for just about as long as he'd known the brunette CBI agent.
-She was still alive, thank god, and giving their shooter what for with her little Sig Sauer.
-He couldn't understand why she evoked such primal urges in him...all went out the window when Lisbon was in danger. :)
- a deeper instinct awakened, an instinct that Jane had no control over, turning him into something else that he didn't understand.:)
- If need be, he'd sell his soul to the devil to save her.:):)
-That's what terrified him. Not just losing Lisbon, but the consequences of losing her. He'd never recover.

I really like the "argument" he has with himself and she keeps "interrupting" him.

this is funny, watching Jane groveling! but I'm a bit confused, at the end of this ep, and in your previous "Tears", Lisbon is very sympathetic towards Jane, feeling bad for him that she has to force him to remember. In this one, he goes crawling to her after the same events. Why has she been crying? and why is she so hateful? when a minute ago she was so kind and helping him?

I do like how contrite he feels when he sees "his Lisbon" had been crying. Love it when he calls her/thinks of her that way:D!

oh, this scene just killed me:(. good tag:), good description of Jane's "return"