Well, lookee there. I DID just lose the Game? How did you know? ;D

That was pretty good, It wasn't laugh-out-loud funny, but a good satire of an actual scene. It would have been hilarious if that had actually happened in the books, before Foaly managed to get the right video up.

-P.W. Bing

Oh god, im actually laughing my head off - reminds me of a friend of mine, his ring tone was rick astley

right at the end of an a level physics mock in the classroom, his ring tone suddenly starts playing from nowhere - best moment ever

O I so hate you right now. ‘You’ve just lost the game’ your evil. Other than that good story.

Maybe you could change the summery methinks?

The other's reactions could have maybe been a bit more "WTF?"

but other than that I LOVED Foaly's reaction. Total classic (and I thought he was going to do it on purpose...)

It would have been funnier if you hadn't given it away in the summary.

~D

-thinks- I might like this if it wasn't so obvious what you were going to do. Alter the summary and so on so we're surprised when the song plays, and maybe it would be a funny drabbly thing. As it is now, no. You lose the entire "humorous" thing by revealing it too soon.