Great story.

I want to get a few questions answered so I can sleep tonight. What was her one regret and what was in her vault.

This. Is. Incredible. Wow. I don't think I've ever come across something as thought-provoking or stirring as this. I'm quite speechless in awe. Wow. You have my eternal favourite.

a very deep story...

Wow. I'm completely amazed.

This is probably one of the most sad, touching, deep stories that I have ever read. You are an awesome writer.

Thank you so much

READ IT. I'm so sorry I never reviewed. I have ADHD I swear.

It was good.

Wish I could say more but dfgdsdgfg so tired. Be my wife, etc.

-Xekstrin

Interesting final chapter. I will admit it might be a little too philosophical for me to get, but I think I get the general idea. If I may elaborate?

From what I was getting that the just because Cyclonis was killed, and the so-called evil of her as well, that the "evil"still remained. That the actual killing of her actually tainted those who wished it and wanted it - you can see the damage that it's done just by rereadign the chapters regarding each individual Storm Hawk.

A glorious chapter; it's so interestign to see the thoughts of someone preparign themselves to die, knowing full well who they and not shirkign from it. It also adds a certain amount of humanity to Cyclonis when she actually doesnt WANT to die.

wow..this was really deep...awesome story!

wow. i love it...your are a gifted author...or just weird. im not understamding yet, are they keeping piper prisoner, or is there some body else they are holding in a cage?

Dark, alluring, fascinating: this chapter is a masterpiece in my fine opinion. It's glorious to see Aerrow's viewpoint in all this (finally) and it keeps up the pattern of high quality literary pieces. Bravo. Love how you made comparisions to Adam and Eve to Aerrow and Cyclonis respectively - it adds a whole 'nother dimension to it.

This is a really well done chapter. Junko's perspective is really interesting, not to mention very human and very suited and realistic to Junko's character. Junko is such a gentle soul, and it makes sense for him to pity Cyclonis. And it's funny how, despite Junko isn't supposed to be the "smart one" he's the most honest.

It's nice to see Junko painted this way. It gives him a bit more depth, and that's always interesting.

Wow, damn, I was kinda hoping that somehow Stork would have survived. Guess not. Damn.

Poor Finn, it's so tragic, but his growth and developement is something I have to agree with - if you're fighting for so long something breaks inside, and you either go numb like Piper has or you start hating the World and full of regrets like Finn has. I cannot wait for the next update!

Like... holy crap! That's all I can really say. Having Cyclonis on that ship is turning out to be a very veyr bad idea. Piper is filled with hate, Stork has gone an offed himself. What next?

The characterization of Stork was also well done, and I think the logic that Stork came up with also sound. Also like how you used the story of Pandora's Box as foil for what Stork was going through.

Interesting. Like the evolution of Piper's character - its very logical, yet so tragic at the same time.