Saw it coming but loved it anyway.
Thank you!

Thanks for the very good read

Again, a sequence that could have folded right into any season 1 or season 2 episode. Thank you for writing it.

Jane really can be sweet cant he :)

Awww, that was sweet. And I love the part where you said "Teresa Lisbon did not take days off work for such little things as being maimed.", that was really funny.

By the way, you said "reasonably angry", which doesn't make sense given the context, so I assumed you meant "unreasonably angry".

This is super cute. The dialogue is great and you've captured their characters perfectly. Excellent stuff!

Jane is such a sweetheart.

Thanks for writing.

Very enjoyable :-)

My favorite quotes:

• “The- he isn’t answering his phone,” Lisbon said. The team got the faint impression that something else was going to follow ‘the’ and that she had quite delicately settled for ‘he’ instead. Even so, somehow she managed to make ‘he’ sound like an insult.

(I laughed out loud there - that actually ties in to some of the psycholinguistic research I've been around :-)

and

• “I can be quite irritating when I mean to be.”

Another LOL moment :-)

Aw. How sweet of Jane. I like how surprised Lisbon is!

That was very, very sweet and very well written.

I enjoyed it very much. Excellent job:)

Leah

Donuts and antibiotics are a winning combination. Excellent ending! Really sweet.

“I can be quite irritating when I mean to be.”

I love that line. Very Jane-like. Great fic! Continue writing stories!

Great story, you've nailed all personalities and I can just *see* this happening in an episode, well done!

*sends author a virtual chocolate donut*

Very sweet, very very sweet!

Okay, I *loved* the exchange between Lisbon and Rigsby at the opening of ch. 3 and the one between Jane & Lisbon while Jane was driving in ch. 2. Even in your antibiotic & donut haze, this was a treat to read! Hope you're back to 100% soon!

You really have the characters down good. Loved seeing Lisbon in a bad mood and Jane taking care of her. Great story! Hope the antibiotics work and you are feeling OK.