Confusing and a little creepy...

Gah, creepy creepy creepy! *shivers* And yet I couldn't stop reading. First time reading about a disturbed!Ryou, and you pulled it off scarily brilliantly!

crepy and brilliant as always. I don't even read fics anymore, only stuff from my favorite Authors. (that includes you, what do you know!)

SO CREEPY!

For a second there I thought Ryou, after taking the woman's eyes, was going to raise her twin unborn babies so that he the doll and them could be one big happy family. But that's even CREEPIER! EKK!

absolutely a delight to read; you deserve far more reviews than you currently have.

there were moments of uncertainty based on a mild lack of clarity at the beginning, but it was easily overlooked, and i dare say it aided your overall tone.

never stop writing; i sorely look forward to more.

-VT

Oh, I love this! Beautifully creepy yet wonderful! I like the style-how it's mostly told from someone else's view, and then you have the journal entries...very good job!

So wonderfully creepy!

I especially love the part about how Yuugi is in pieces. I don't think there's anyway he would be the same after the series.

Kinda creepy, that image is going to stick with me for a while - doesn't help that it is storming outside, good job.

This...this is what good fiction is made of.

Excellent work. Well-worth the sometimes confusing 2nd-person narration. I finally understood the emphasis on her purple eyes midway though the diary-like log, and the revelation made me jump; appropriate though it is.

More from Ryuutitsu? *gasp*

Lovely, as always. It's always fun to read somethng in a diferent tense than the norm, and seeing this form an outside view was an interesting twist, as well. Good for Ryou, but sad about poor Yuugi.

Looking forward to anything new you put out! A tout a l'heure~

Freaky. . . I love it! Ryou is just the cutest little psychopath.

Good luck with Faust.

Wow,

It's really great. and creepy..lol

Poor Ryou, he's so messed up.

. creepy...i loved it!

Bravo! Bravo!

Interesting perspective, fine writing, and a wonderfully twisted plot. I enjoyed reading this very, very much!

Gorgeous, fascinating short story. Wonderful job with characterization, and also with the portrayal of Ryou's mental state/effects of, etc. The interaction between characters was very believable and the way you wrote the entire thing in second person (of the neighbor, no less!) was brilliant. The flow was beautifully smooth, and there were no rough points. Altogether, great job!

-Koko

At first I didn't get this - meaning it wasn't too obvious - but then somewhere in the middle I couldn't stop reading. This story is so creepily beautiful...have you ever published real short-story novels before? You really, really should.