:( That was depressing... I like Misty's response though. :P

Sad... but a good story, no errors, although the two-column thing was slightly hard to follow.

That was perfect, so beautiful! I love how this is written from Ash's perspective, was that a whiff of IC I got from it? I believe so.

Anyway, I probably sound stupid. Sorry, I just can't explian how good this is! Painfully short, but it got the point across. :)

~MidnightSakuraBlossom

wow, this is cool :d

This is a good one.

this sucks

:/

Don't leave, Ash.

Just kidding, you can do whatever you want, bud. I would prefer it if you would stay, but it's my job to say that, since the show wouldn't be much without you. I guess I understand that you kind of get smothered a lot. I know you love your friends, but space is good too. But just becasue people believe in you doesn't mean you have to go sending angry emails. We all just want you to know that we have your back. And it's not a crime to have people love you, pity you, sympathize with you, CARE about you. You always wanted to go out to see the world, make new friends. You did exactly that.

Misty's response was PERFECT. :)

*faves*

It's nice seeing Ash from a different perspective, I actually can imagine this a little.

It was really good, that's all I have to say.

So very...deep! Ash, how could you send such a thign to your own mother?

Never thought I'd see his side of Ash. LoL.

Good job, very, very good work!

The Sky's Bouquet

ok... i don't get it. maybe...

Nice!

Keep up the excellent work!

Yay for Misty! *laugh* I bet no one else (except Brock) had that reaction!

great simple and easy understand brilliant

p.s would you be able to review/flame my fic i would apreciate it

thanks BTG

aw! cute! -