I really enjoyed the character development in this one. :D it was awesomeeeee

I really enjoyed this study of Temari- and that it focuses on her childhood and history with fans. The story feels fresh and vivid, and is well-written. I feel somehow nostalgic when I read it, but I don't have a clue as to why that would be. Anyhow, thank you for sharing.

LOVED it, Temari is my favorite character and I felt that you perfectly captured her

That was really interesting

Excellent! This is very well written and very entertaining to read. Keep up the good work!

The imagery is gorgeous. I love how she's sassy yet not loud and immature.

I love this. I really like the idea of Temari's fans as a woman's traditional weapon in Suna and her taking them up as a testament to her own strength and a strength of a tradition. She's very well done.

_ I just reviewed on your LJ but I feel like telling you once again how amazing this fic is!

~Jenni~

Also very good. You have a way of pinning down subtle things and expanding on them without eclipsing the more obvious qualities of the characters. Very well done.

awesome story _

I love the melancholy and the historical flair. Your charcter analysis is perfect, and I love the duality of her that you reveal at the end. Really beautiful writing. Everything you write is wonderful. Keep it up!

Well written! D I liked it.

This was absolutely amazing. You captured Temari's spirit and personality brilliantly. I love how you incorporated their mother and little customs of the Sand Village (sometimes I really wish Kisimoto-sama would tell us a little more about Sunagakure.)

I also like how you included Gaara and Kankurou but not so much that they took over the story - it was really all about Temari and it's a fitting character sketch. The best detail - Baki! I don't much care for him but when I read stories like this, he starts to grow on me. PLEASE keep writing.

Maki

This is superbly written. I really enjoyed reading it and I could imagine everything clearly in my mind. You've captured everyone's personality and the way Sand works perfectly as well. I always forget that not everyone is as friendly as Konoha, but you've quite effectively reminded that other villages are different. Well done, I'll enjoy this story for a long, long time :)

-Kat

I love this, beginning to end. Awesome character sketch. Do Kankuro next! Or Baki!