Very nice. I have seen a lot of bad Pirates fan fiction, and have written some myself, but this is really good. Although, Elizabeth shooting Norrington is a bit drastic.

Utter brilliance…the angst-the passion-all done perfectly!

roxanne, i love all your fanfics, but this one is just amazing! it really wasn't something i was expecting, so it was a good surprise, haha. just wonderful, i almost wish they could've made it something like this in AWE, even though the wedding scene was as brilliant as it was. looking foward to your next stuff! keep up the talent

Another nice idea that didn't quite happen. :) I like the imagery though. :)

Oh my gosh, that was brilliant! Seriously... that was amazing! I think I like it better than what actually happened in the movie!

‘Will you marry me?’ actually means ‘Do you promise never to kiss Jack again, ever?’ Hahahahah I LOVE that line! Hilarious!

"Will’s stupid blow-up-the-beastie-and-kill-myself-in-the-process plot." Haha so true! That was really funny!

this is awesome, even though it doesnt actually happen. i still think that that scene in the movie is the most romantic scenes ever. so this will have to settle for a close second, ok?

AW! *squee* i cant believe i didnt read this until now! that was beautiful!

Aw! I love this! Definitely one that I'm going to have to fav.

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Trophy, Miz Roxanne J-I agree with one of your other reviews, bout being so feed up with almost there-and then, dearie, here you be. I read to see in my head and heart-what I read from you are my beloved ones. It's hard to write Will for most it seems-he's not a milktoast, Elisabeth not a shrieking harridan. They are both passionate people, not as Jack is passionate-Barbossa is wonderful as well.

That middle of all hell breaking loose proposal and subsequent mar-ri-age is a classic and you caught the boat on the 'splaining of it. And yes, I am smooth eat up with AWE-the love scene at the end is one of the most blasting powerful knock your socks off love scenes ever. The very idea when he removes his boot, you think he's going to kiss her leg, but no, he simply touches her so gently and breathes in the scent of what they had been about for hours. Thanks for the words and go to the head of the class on this one-Pearlseed

This was so good. I loved the line "it's much easier to kiss Will than talk to him."

Fabulous!

Could you write a scene about the actual scene?

That would be so great.

Oh that's adorable! Very sweet, almost as beautiful as their wedding in AWE, lol. Didn't you just love that scene? I know I did!

brilliant. keep it up!

OK...I can't fathom how I didn't read this W/E gem before now. Absolutely brilliant, I think you captured the emotions and each character's personality to perfection. Bravo, and thanks for a wonderful read filled with W/E goodness! :)

~Shaliza

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"Dare to dream..."

I'm very excited. I just watched the trailer then. Can't wait till May! Good story by the way. Willabeth all the way.

Rose

OMG...sheer brilliance!