That was fantastic :D

Oh My God that was so funny! Please write another one! Pretty Pretty Please!

that was so cool and funny

That was one of the funniest things I've ever read. I almost asperated on Cheerios. I absolutely loved it.

Can we say..."artistic liscense"? That was so frickin HI-LARIOUS though. I'm sitting in the library at my school, with everyone staring at me, and trying my hardest not to spew M&M mini's all over the place. I thought I was going to die at the 'River-Jayne' thing. Would've been funnier had he been on her shoulders though...hahahahahaha! Oh I think I'm gonna die. Laughing. That was so funny. Please, keep going. I need humor like this in my day...*weeze* Oh Lordy...

And yes, very out of character, but oh well...it can be forgiven.

Wen hao

Sky

I don't care how badly out of character it was, I got several laughs from it!

hahahahahahahahaha!

whoa.

LOL! Man! I couldn't stop laughing. Don't much care that it wasn't true to their characters... humor don't have to be... and in most cases, it makes humor all the more funny :D

This story is quiet Jawsome. Could have used more romance, to be honest. Still, the humor was good, for a pitiful hyoo-mahn.

Oh, poor Jayne!

I thought your interpretation of River was GREAT! She seemed in-character to me... whatever.

Whe, this is the best attempt at Firefly-related humor I'VE ever read... very, very nice.

This merits only one reply: PSYCHIC MIND BATTLE!

Hilarious and on the best of drugs! Loved it! *g*

Oi! Blackheart-san! Welcome back!

Entertaining story. Though I have no idea of the series or characters, not having watched "Firefly" before, I enjoyed the romp. There's few things better than senselessly haphazard slapstick comedy. And your latest foray is the first in a while that I've come upon.

Waiting for the next!