and i SO want 2 c aravis's father and ahoshta's reactions... pleeeeeeease...!

continue...

thiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiisss...

aaaooowww! can't you extend this, cant you make this in2 a multichapter story? isnt there any way...pleaseeeee... come on...! *puppy dog eyed smile with pout*

Don't bother names but could you continue the story? That be wonderful.

I loved it, is a beautiful oneshot

I loved this! I loved Corin's teasing of Cor, and Cor's eagerness to get married in the middle of the night! It was a wonderful story!

Aw, this was really cute! Well done... even if this review does come half a decade after the fic was posted :)

- Avia

i really like it!

you just HAD to make it a oneshot didn't you? -chews lip- Dang. Y'know why? CAUSE IT'S REALLY REALLY GOOD! What amazing fluff! -eats fluff- m, delish. XD

Oh, how lovely! You have a gift for dialogue - I loved Cor and Corin's conversation.

“What’s this? Our future king keeps bottles of liquor in his room?”she teased.

“My dear, I am shocked you should question my morals. As you said, I am the future king! The survival of this country depends on my abilities to govern it properly. Of course there is a bottle of liquor in my room.”

CLASSIC! That was my fav line...well done!

This story amde me laugh and i loved the fluffyness! Ausome story!

- Fairy )

lol that's hlarious i love it keepwriting

I'm drownig in cheese! ;)

but for the most part, I love that - Cor declaration of love was absoulutly horribe, but the rest was wonderful.

I didn't thing it was THAT OOC, & I'm picky w/ that.

yay for an actual romance w/ my fav Narnia couple (besides either of the pevisie boys me, that is, though I'm am partial to Ed)

also one more thing I couldn't resist commenting on...

though I dislike slash & incest because they're against cannon, I FIRMLY don't believe they're "wrong" - just not my cup of tea. I respect you beliefs, but from a atheist who loves Narnia as wonderful children's stories, please respect mine.

now that that's through, I do think you are a wonderful writer!

"And his grandson, at the rate you're going." My favourite line!

I actually quite enjoyed this, and don't think it's particularly OOC at all. I mean, Aravis and Cor have grown up a fair bit by this point, and because they're the sort of people to do things in outbursts (whether arguing or otherwise), it seems to fit somehow. And everyone has their weak moments...

There aren't nearly enough Aravis/Cor stories out there; I know you're busy, but I'd like to encourage you to try another. I sure enjoyed this one!

Keep writing!

~Danni

Yay, happy ending. I really loved this, Aravis is one of my favourite characters and they're the only real pairing in the book. I wonder how C.S. Lewis could keep from making more pairings through seven books?