Reviews for A New Player In The Force
Navn Ukjent chapter 28 . 6/29
Nice chapter again, despite ending on a Cliff Hanger.
Rosiekay chapter 28 . 6/29
Perfect as always keep up the good work stay safe
OldDustX chapter 24 . 6/29
Whether we wanted it or not, we've stepped into a war with the Cabal on Mars. So let's get to taking out their command, one by one. Valus Ta'aurc. From what I can gather he commands the Siege Dancers from an Imperial Land Tank outside of Rubicon. He's well protected, but with the right team, we can punch through those defenses, take this beast out, and break their grip on Freehold.
Blueowl chapter 28 . 6/29
Sweet. Hope they can defend the planet and themselves. Dooku is awesome, as usual.
Looking forward to more.
heyster1 chapter 28 . 6/29
Any recommendations for hp/gamer fics? I liked your recommendations about other gamer fics, especially augment gothic.

I thought you wanted the temple ship and planet to be a secret from the jedi council so just wondering why dooku would ask for help from them. I guess dooku is asking from the group supporting their cause and not the main jedi council. Looking forward to more money making operations, buying big things like ships, and getting everything ready before the invasion of naboo. Please keep writing.
spworynski chapter 28 . 6/28
Love this chapter, don't like Tedra, she's a clingy little girl and doesn't seem as interesting as the other girls in Cameron's life. I hope she won't become yet another romance interest like it was implied.
TigerJacob chapter 28 . 6/28
This is gonna be dope, kinda wish he just rips a ship out of the sky or collides them but I'm sure whatever direction the battle is taken will be epic regardless.

With how rare (assumedly) phrik is I definitely wouldn't want the republic/palpatine to get his hands on it, but I'm sure he has his sources for such items regardless. Cameron getting access evens that specific scale somewhat.

I'd say he just got his own ashoka but he got to skip all the hostility by being her knight (not yet but she wants that ironically) in shining armor (once again not yet but itll happen eventually).

Depending on the age of bo katan that could be another one to fall for him, based on his combat aptitude and lack of non violence. Though I don't know if mandalorians try to stay pure as a combat species, suppose it would just mean more flags to raise.

Which reminds me, discovered theirs a force martial art to enhance the body (or something along those lines) matukai is what it's called. Apparently they were around and were besieged by the emperor so they obviously were known. Would love to see cameron encounter them.

Looking forward to more especially on that semi cliffie, thanks for the read!
LandWhale172 chapter 28 . 6/28
I like the sound of the whole becoming the youngest knigh and taking her on as a padawan thing.
Rakaan chapter 12 . 6/28
Would Sidious kidnap him though? I mean, this is the guy that spent 20 years subtly manipulating Anakin to be his ideal apprentice; and he'd out-sourced like 90% of his training to the Jedi. I don't believe for a moment that he couldn't have arranged an "accident" for a newly Knighted Obi-Wan and had a young Anakin disappear.
Drunken Hamster chapter 28 . 6/28
Nice. (Yes, a one-word review. It's late for me, lol.)

Can't wait for the next one!

~Drunk
MattKennedy chapter 28 . 6/28
Cool development with Cam starting on the path to learning Force Alchemy (and starting to learn a bit of the dark side).
Kraftykidd chapter 28 . 6/28
You know, this upcoming confrontation would be the shining moment for Battle Meditation, to help coordinate the defenders while boosting them in all aspects. Especially as 4-5 ships is a lot even for Cameron at this point. Hell, with his current regen, plus his new ability to meditate while using force abilities, he could keep it up far longer. Long enough to (1) Level it some, and (2) take out a good chunk of enemies. I mean, the metaphysical aspect of Heart of the Force might make this avenue far more effective as he becomes the heart of their defense. Might make his BM far more effective and powerful and let him do more with it. And if he starts to lose focus or too much FP, he can always have the defenders withdraw strategically without causalities for him to then go in and mop up the remainders.
Reichenfaust chapter 28 . 6/28
The fact that you brought up the Contispex Dynasty, and the Pius Dea Crusades, shows you have SW knowledge well in hand. The grasshopper comment was a laugh and a half.

Yeah, Kill Pre Vizla, kill'em hard... In fact, I think he was the one who set Jango up during the "Mandalore Incident", and got the True Mandalorians kiced off the planet and out of Mandalorian Society...
Zarroc789 chapter 28 . 6/28
Absolutely fantastic chapter. By far my favorite Star Wars Fiction
Rokai666 chapter 28 . 6/28
great chapter and I'm no expert on star wars lore but I think that for most people in the outer worlds their access to core world technology is limited so you can assume that if they dont have many computer terminals they wouldn't wanna mess with the coding. Anakin grew up in a junk shop full of droids and speeders that needed repair, but most people would barely have a speeder. the exemptions being bounty hunters, merchants and people whose job is to repair tech.
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