Reviews for My Zing (Part 2)
Drunken Hamster chapter 3 . 8/15/2018
Dude, she keeps asking for the cream, she's gonna come back with a bun in the oven, ya'know?

Dammit, Denis, you need to indulge her less. Or at least get her some birth control. Don't end up like her parents.

Then again... If your two species aren't even reproduction compatible, then... By all means, fill 'er up!

~Drunk
Super Saiyan CJ chapter 2 . 7/14/2018
I loved the series! Would you consider doing more please!?
115.666-7 chapter 3 . 12/2/2017
Incredible. I mean just in fucking credible. The day I ever own a business printing out stories I'm making my own games and shit anything that has to do with entertainment which is what I plan to get into it soon I'm definitely and I knew definitely hiring your ass as a writer. Romantic passion in this one was way better than the last one and the details in the lemon and my god when you made that little funny seeing that one funny ass part right in the middle of him thrusting into her. I didn't burst out laughing physically too much but inside I was fucking dying. And I must say thank you for those funny ass Parts because as much as I love a good romantic passionate story I still have that envious rage in me and all those funny moments made me feel better and cut me from Chuck in my phone across the pavement. Or at the very least from dropping it from having my head down in deep thought. And I am honestly very very disappointed that you will not make any more of these. But it is a writer's choice and for that I thank you for sharing this with the world. Because that as well it's your choice and no one else would have been able to see this masterpiece half you have not chosen to post it. When I was posting stories on here I left them up for 2 years and only two people ever read them. Or more like only two red one and another one only one person read and I know they read because they reviewed. But don't expect to see any of mines on my profile because those stories are history. They're gone and they're gone for good and I have not made a copy nor can I remember you then from heart. But I must admit you're almost starting to make me want to start posting again. You kind of gave me a bit of inspiration but of course it's not really still enough for me to start posting again. Because just like it was your choice to write and post this it was also my choice to decide to read this and if nobody else like the other people who have reviewed had decided to read this then the story would have gotten nowhere and this masterpiece would have never been truly shared with the world and for that reason I won't probably never post here again because I'm not going to wait and expect hopefully one person to give it a chance. Keep in mind I'm not saying I stopped writing completely just no longer here on this site. But again you do give me more inspiration to keep on writing and for that as well I thank you.
that one guy62 chapter 1 . 10/31/2017
should make a wedding one (my zing) to finish the story line but that's just my thoughts
RustyPete12 chapter 3 . 5/15/2017
Busted, Dennis! Still, it's to be expected, I suppose... good job, I suppose.
Avionon chapter 3 . 5/23/2016
The ending made me laugh. Brilliantly done!
MasterNCS53 chapter 1 . 5/10/2016
Keep making them ur good at it.
TempleOfWolves chapter 1 . 4/29/2016
"look.. when you get a werewolf girl wet you have, I repeat have to handle it"
you write great dialogue.
Super Saiyan CJ chapter 1 . 3/22/2016
A good conclusion to a good series! This was awesome!
Guest chapter 3 . 1/22/2016
I love this sexual chapter
Guest chapter 3 . 1/21/2016
YES! DO A PAIRING
BlitzKraig chapter 3 . 1/16/2016
Yeah sure make another one why not. I love this pairing so much
Anonymous chapter 3 . 1/16/2016
you have a really great talent of describing *ahem* details. but with all seriousness your really good at writing and describing you should write more stories, just before you publish things make sure to spell check you never know when youll mispell something...
Jigsaw1234 chapter 3 . 1/14/2016
Great story m8 fantastic work
Guest chapter 3 . 1/13/2016
Just make a full on novel about their relationship
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