This has been an excellent story. Though out of sync with canon, you built on the setting of Season 1 and crafted something truly exceptional. Well done, indeed

Whew! Re-read this beast of a fic in two days! Now for a proper review! The action, adventure, politicing, all were stupendously done! It's a blast to read intelligent evil like this, but it's so hard to manage! She coudn't win every time since that would have been boring and dissapointing, while losing every time would have been as if she wasn't intelligent or skilled at all. You have managed to strike a wonderful balance that still remains out of reach for myself, and perhaps some of my favorite authors as well.

You have truely achieved the roller coaster you desired. My favorite parts was the final battle of course. Namely, the final blow. Reading that scene the second time was almost as thrilling as the first. Unfortunately, or perhaps fortunately, that was so memorable that even when I forgot the bulk of this fic I remembered that victory still.

Great work!

I am going to lose my mind if I someone doesn’t tell me what Stan tomb stone says

I'm sorry but I'm gonna stop reading you ruined this story for me now I'll always think that he's mentally ill and its all fake

All magical existence of Star ever being on earth was erased?

Well I’m confused who’s king brad but so far, I say your doing a good job with this story. Maybe I can write my own someday?

Uh oh spaghettio’s y’all know what time it is... SMUT TIME

Bruh you really gonna play me like that

Ffffffffuuuuuuuuuddddddggggggeeeeeee! T_T you monster. Reading this story is like eating hot curry, it causes pain. Kudos

I am sure this is old cause I finished svtfoe and nth makes sense now

I am in the second chapter but I can see you're a good writer

Now I read this story a long time ago in Wattpad but my god the nostalgia reading some of this I literally had to skip dozen chapters as it is way too much to read In not up to reading it again tbh I’ll reread it during summer when I have time but still this is easily Number 1 on Svtfoe I can’t believe i forgot this story Sorry other story this is just way too good the quantity and quality is absurd

Finished this story a long time ago, and it popped back in my head just now. Just felt the need to tell you that this is not only the best SVTFOE fic I ever read but the BEST FANFICTION I’VE READ EVER. This is a fic that all should be based on.

Also you wouldn’t even need to have seen the show to think this is a great story. I told a friend to read this and he had never seen the show and he thought it was awesome and I couldn’t give you a bigger compliment then that.

Personally this fic should be turned into a movie, it’s that good. So to end, thank for one hell of story.

So this was an interesting chapter, I love how you incorporated gravity falls into this chapter as they share the same universe in some sort of form. Just perfect

Ishtar: My magic barrier sealing off the Earth dimension has no weakness!

Dipper Pines: YOU UTTER FOOL! Human science is the greatest in the multiverse!