Reviews for Marble and Molerats
Scififan33 chapter 6 . 1/31/2019
is this the end? I liked it. Not sure why you made Bilbo a girl though.
Yukatana chapter 6 . 6/27/2018
This is an amazing Story! THX
Guest chapter 3 . 1/13/2017
*snickers* The neat pyramid of large gems probably struck them as quite impressive on top of how many were about, and I'd wager it was a mess because someone fell over into it, what with their boisterous greetings. XD "Some kind of Baroness" is certainly an improvement over thinking Bag End is a currently-empty brothel, what with so many rooms - cultural misunderstandings indeed.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/13/2017
*snickers* Considering how many generations her spawn have spawned that she has witnessed, and the position in the Shire one of them married into, "Mother of all mothers" feels /very/ appropriate. XD
loretta537 chapter 6 . 12/18/2016
this was a good story, although i wish they had lived
multyfangirl21 chapter 6 . 6/8/2016
this is a little bit disappointing , i was expecting more , but then currently i've been reading love tales between fem Bilbo and Thorin
multyfangirl21 chapter 2 . 6/8/2016
aww , couldn't she live a couple more years?
will the party be at her great great grandmother's old house? ah yes it is , well thats an ok 2nd best with Amadel being still alive be the 1st
multyfangirl21 chapter 1 . 6/8/2016
well i think the company will be happier with her since shes part Dwarrow and her great great grandmother's blood show in her even more then her mother and she has some skill with a sword, ooh will the company meet her great great grandmother before she departs?
Minna Vipera chapter 3 . 2/24/2016
About the name, I think maybe Kali would be more fitting than Kayli, it's not to odd for a name. I love the story, you are awesome
bookygurl3400 chapter 6 . 1/15/2016
Now you need to write out how the LotR plot would be affected by BilBO being BilBA. Maybe a bit more genderbending? ... Or do you already have one...? To the story page!
1sunfun chapter 6 . 12/14/2015
Good.
shadewatcher chapter 6 . 3/30/2015
Nooooooo! Why must you have killed off Thorin and the boys. I always hated that part. :P I mean really they finally win the day only to be cut down i battle. Urg!
This is still a nice twist on the canon though. :)
Dazed Ryo chapter 6 . 3/28/2015
Wait...is this completed? Or not? Because it feels like this could be continued and this fic hasn't been marked as completed, but at the same time, everything seems resolved. It's very confusing. In any case, this has been quite the interesting read. I enjoyed it.
kurokazeryuu chapter 6 . 3/27/2015
Is this story going to be continued or is it completed? If completed, can you mark it as completed.
Guest chapter 6 . 3/1/2015
More now please
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