Reviews for Slow
Lillielle chapter 1 . 5/30/2014
I don't usually like Romione, but somehow this is perfect. I can see Ginny turning into a little match-maker like that, and setting the two of them up is great. Somehow it felt really believable to me, too...the both of them not saying anything, and Ron being so awkward and hesitant about it all. It was really sweet, and I liked it loads.
reminiscent-afterthought chapter 1 . 5/28/2014
I'm not usually a fan of dialogue beginnings but I think you've pulled this one off beautifully, particularly the way the context is both obvious from that first line and built up solidly therafter (ie. we know it's after the war and before their marriage, but not how much after, or who's talking etc. until a few lines later). And Ginny's little explanation of their circle was amusing too; it often comes out confusing, but I'm giggling at this and still making perfect sense of it (and extra kudos points for making me giggle in the library. :D) And Ginny and Harry setting them up and Ron about to walk out on it. He's adorable but sometimes he needs a good shake. :D The way it ends is interesting, but from you who loves Romione it really couldn't have ended any other way. :)
Lara1221 chapter 1 . 5/26/2014
Ooh, I read this when I first got the alert and loved it! I'm sorry I didn't review then. I really like everything about this, to be honest. You're writing has this thing where its so natural, and I love that. The only criticism I have is to be honest, the date thing is kinda cheesy, but now I like it. Idk, I'm just on the fence about it. Nevermind. I really like you Ginny was super involved; haha, that's great. Characterization was great. Really nice job.
The Eclectic Bookworm chapter 1 . 5/21/2014
I loved this, it was lovely and romantic, but I thought Hermione was a bit OOC mostly because she's the kind of person who would pursue Ron after he kissed her.
You make it work, though-good going! I loved the ending, really sweet. I also like that Ron is a little awkward at expressing his feelings. He's very much in character in this fic, which I appreciate. Too many times Ron is portrayed wrongly, and you did an excellent job of keeping him, well, Ron.
I like that Ginny and Harry set them up. That was a cute idea.
Kailey Hamilton chapter 1 . 5/15/2014
Oh, this was hilarious. It's definitely like the two of them to be absolutely oblivious. Especially Ron - I wanted to hit him with a blunt object here because he was so IC in his infuriating awkwardness. I'm like, how much slower do they want to take this, anyway, after dancing around each other for seven years? But at the same time, I'm pretty sure that this is somehow accurate, and I love that you didn't make them jump from war to eternal love and that there was a period of uncertainty. desperate!Ginny was probably my favorite thing - it's like her to be somewhat forceful, now isn't it? lol. I really did enjoy this piece. Great job!
Ralinde chapter 1 . 5/10/2014
Oh dear, they are so awkward around each other haha. I think you've captured that wonderfully. The way they just continue dancing around wach other even after that kiss...
There were a couple of instances were you repeated words/phrases, but it didn't really deter from the story.
I really Ginny taking action, she would definitely do that and the home cooked meal is a sweet idea.
Lovely Romione as always!
eostby chapter 1 . 5/9/2014
Awkwardly stumbling into the romantic entanglement literally everyone but they saw coming? Yep, sounds like a Romione plot to me. ;P Seriously though, you did a wonderful job of setting this up so that it didn't feel forced, even when Ginny was actually exerting some force. A cute, sweet story that I really enjoyed.
MelodyPond77 chapter 1 . 5/7/2014
LOL Romione. They are so awkward with each other. And yet, so perfect. I absolutely loved this. :D I think Ginny setting them up was beautiful. Also, Ron and Hermione having such an awkward first date (ish) experience is just so so SO like them and adorable! You make me squee with glee. Great job!
autumn midnights chapter 1 . 5/4/2014
I really like how realistic it is. The part about how it would be a bit strange to be in a romantic relationship after being friends for so long made so much sense, especially - I can definitely imagine them thinking that. I really like how you've captured that post-war atmosphere, also, and how they're trying to be happy but it's going to take time before things are truly okay. I really like the idea of them kind of dancing around each other for a month before they actually do anything more about the BoH kiss, also - I can definitely imagine them both thinking the other had lost interest.

Ginny as the matchmaker was also great, and I loved her conversation with Hermione. You've really captured Ginny's fiery spirit, in my opinion, and I can picture her being a bit nosy and interfering with Hermione's love life. I like seeing the friendship between Ginny and Hermione, also.
deletes chapter 1 . 5/4/2014
Ah, your Romione is truly gorgeous! Although this was post-war!Romione like your other one, you managed to give it a completely different tone, whilst still keeping it amazingly in sync with canon. The muted Hinny was also very nice. I like how they admitted that they weren't happy, but that they deserved to be happy. And it was brilliant how realistic you made the Romione relationship at the end, with the admission that it was still a bit strange, since they'd been friends for so long, for them to be romancing each other now, and I was glad they'd decided to take it slow, since they had all of forever to be together :)
LillyMay77 chapter 1 . 4/20/2014
So sweet! Luckily Ginny helped them out! Great story!
Ellen1983 chapter 1 . 4/20/2014
Another real good one, thanks! I'm definitely your fan :) but in this story Ron is "overly shy" (if you understand what I mean) and self-doubt for my taste. I really do hope you can get what I've been trying to say, cause English is foreign for me and I really hope my grammar is not as terrible as it could be.
regbride12 chapter 1 . 4/15/2014
Ahhhhh more Romine plot bunnies please!:)
This was very very well written :)
Accio14Anna chapter 1 . 4/12/2014
This story is so good! Loved it! Could you do a chapter 2? Would love to know what happens next? :P
Gretel chapter 1 . 4/12/2014
This was really cute and so well written!
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