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Author has written 3 stories for Naruto, Star Wars, Harry Potter, and Mass Effect. Name: Friends call me Jonah, my actual name doesn't matter Age: Out of High-school. Sex: I'm Male Likes: Reading and Writing, Music, Games and Martial Arts. Dislikes: Arrogant people, unnecessary rudeness, Racism (I like jokes though). [Attention] I'm re-imagining Type Earth, changing and tweaking things until I'm satisfied. The reason for the rewriting that I often do is simple, I'm getting more comfortable with writing and my style is developing. If I believe I can write it better now and get it to flow better and be more interesting, Then I'll rewrite it. I believe rewrites to be crucial to a stories development and I will, if I feel it is necessary, do it often. Just wished to inform everyone wondering were a story went after I take it down. I plan to write a couple other stories like Star Wars( Currently working on), Avengers, Dark Souls, Harry Potter and so on. Updates will very, depending. The following is information for anyone reading my stories, either as a heads up or if you're angry over the characters apparent OOC-ness or anything else, really. My Stories (-Most if not all my stories are AU...I shouldn't have to say this because you should expect it. The kinda obvious hint is that it's on FanFiction. So expect things not to be the exact same as the Manga/Anime. If you can do that then you might enjoy the story. If you can't and are going to complain that my story doesn't fit your very myopic mindset on how MY character should act, speak and what his powers and background are going to be...then leave. Don't 'review' with your bias and completely irreverent opinions, when I ask for 'reviews' I mean to tell me if you see mistakes with grammar or how to make the story better in general not to take your frustrations out at my expense. I personally love the Ideas and theories in Naruto. I however dislike a lot of the series and how the characters act as well as the general mood of the first half of the series. In my stories Naruto will behave differently, most noticeably he will not be a moron, weak or instantly forgive personal betrayal. He was like that in the series for several reasons; One, he was an orphan and the point of the series was to show how people except others. Two, he was trying to receive attention from others. Three, he was his own comedic relief, which was unnecessary in my mind due to the mood of the series, happy go luck, anyway. Even when it did dive into darker aspects of the world, jinchuuriki and peoples hatred towards them, it quickly switched to a happy moment. Four, he was modeled after Goku the, arguably, most loved mentally damaged character in anime/manga. And lastly, it was to set his personality and made him endearing, which could have been done other ways but oh well. Anyway, my stories will have the things that make him Naruto. He will be loyal to his friends and those that earn his trust. His love of Ramen, Orange and pranks. His determination and will to never give up even in hopeless situations. His unpredictably and genius level strategy and combat skills so on and so on. What I won't have in my stories though are the following. Him being an Idiot in all aspects. Him not knowing any Techniques except for his typical, that I really didn't like. Him being loyal to anyone, Sasuke, that betrays him several times and clearly wishes to kill him, his friends, family and destroy his home etc. A couple of reviewers complained about my ooc Naruto. He, in my opinion, is still Naruto. He just has different experiences thus a different personality. His base personality traits are the same as I listed above. For example, Naruto in Chronicles is different then the Canon one, obviously. I didn't make him the same because the way I mixed the stories, he didn't just appear in the universe. His back story will explain where he came from and why his personality is that way. If people would just wait for him to give it, rather than take the story at face value and deem it overpowered Marty-Stu, ooc, self-insert trash as some do. My point, this is Fan-fiction. This site was made so writers could stretch their imagination and use their favorite series. Some people write because they wanted the story to turn out differently or they enjoyed it and wish to have it continue. Some want to explore 'what if's' and things of that nature. Either way everyone, Writer or reader, came here for the stories. If you don't like it, instead of hating on people's story because it doesn't match your specific wants, don't review with hateful and demeaning messages. Tell the author your reasoning in a calm and orderly manner or don't review at all. Reviews in my opinion are to help authors, that means giving them constructive criticism. 'I hate your story' or 'This character is ooc' or telling them they need to change something ridiculous in their story because you don't like it doesn't help. Even reviews like 'Love it' or 'that was good please continue' don't necessarily help. Don't get me wrong it gives a boost to confidence and makes me smile, but it doesn't help the story or my skills as an author. This applies to all future stories as well, regardless of genre, characters or worlds. The girl you just called fat? She is overdosing on diet pills. The girl you just called ugly? She spends hours putting makeup on hoping people will like her. The boy you just tripped? He is abused enough at home. See that man with the ugly scars? He fought for his country. That guy you just made fun of for crying? His mother is dying. Put this as you're profile if you're against bullying. I bet 95% of you wont put this on your profile, but I'm sure the people with a heart and backbone will. |
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