Reviews for Unwanted Feelings
MBAV fan66 chapter 18 . 9/25/2018
Omg! You guys are back! :D Well, uh...Jujupop is, that is. I've actually already been talking to you (and reading your 3 new stories, as well), TEM a lot on here, recently. *awkward laugh* But still! *giggles* ;P It's nice to see you both back in action on this here story, again! :)

Thank GOD! That Ethan and Benny were able to salvage their relationship with each other and quickly realize what's been going on with Ethan lately! He was under Jesse's trance, all along! Phew! Benny, you know Ethan would never want to kill you for reals though, willing. Maybe metaphorically though, if you ever did something really stupid or embarrassed the crapped out of him somehow. Then yeah! He'd kill you in the worse way possible, then! By punishing you with no canoodling time with Ethan until further notice! Lol! XD But in all seriousness, Ethan would never physically try to kill him on purpose, though. :)

I'm sad that the next chapter will be the last. :( But hey! So, far this story has lasted 18 chapters! That's a pretty great run, I'd say! :D So, congratulations to you both on a fabulous and well written story, my friends! You deserve a pat on the back! *pats you both on the back for a job well done* :D Now, I can't wait to see how it'll all end! Or who even won the battle against vampires and werewolves, as well! And also, what became of Jesse now that Ethan and Benny both know that he had tranced Ethan into being his spy and into wanting to kill Benny! :D
MBAV fan66 chapter 17 . 11/24/2015
And the day of reckoning has begun! Lol! Vampires vs Werewolves!

Well, I don't know about everyone else, but I liked it. It had a lot of action in it and Ethan kicking some werewolf ass (not that I'm on the vampires side or any side in particular)! And now, Ethan's trying to kill his boyfriend, thanks to that dick Jesse and his stupid trance over him. I hope Benny can realize that he's in a trance that's making him want to kill him. Don't blame him Benny! It's not his fault! Lol! But at last...cliff hanger. It's like I hate them, but also love them at the same time. Lol! :P

I so can't wait for the next chapter! :)
champagnealec chapter 17 . 11/24/2015
*yells and curses* Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!

Son of a bitch, damn it. Really hate Jesse now, Jesus, Ethan please be okay... And Jesse if you wanted to kill Benny so badly, you should've done it yourself, but I guess being a chicken sh*t means you gotta have people do it for you... and you knew that it'd work having Ethan kill Benny since they're close, but still a dumbass... Like hugeeeeeeeee!

I hope nothing happens to the boys, just them getting hurt is fine, dying, not so much, I will cry, or gasp or do both...

Eeke, can't wait for the next chapter!
TiredOfBeingNice chapter 17 . 11/24/2015
YOU FINALLY UPDATE AND THEN THIS CLIFFHANGER?! NOOOOOOOOO!

Fantastic work as always, by the way. It was really suspenseful. Makes my sick day better :)

Holy shit I need to know what's happening. Please update ASAP!
Awesome chapter 16 . 9/6/2015
Wow the battle just begun. I can't wait what going to happen next. I wonder if Ethan going to kill Benny or not I hope he doesn't. I hope you update soon.
champagnealec chapter 16 . 8/31/2015
And so it starts! The fight between vampires and werewolves has begun!

Ethan's tranced to kill Benny by Jesse, WHO'S NOT PLAYING BY THE RULES, AND THAT'LL GET HIM KILLED IF HE DOESN'T WATCH IT.

So, Benny has the powers of an alpha, so that's why he was chosen to become a werewolf. *hums* Very interesting. Werewolves have picked their members very carefully. Meanwhile, The Vampire Council has crappy choices.

Well, the only person that can break Ethan out of the trance is, Benny. Because love always overpowers everything.

Werewolves have NO problem with their kind dating vampires... Who would've thought.

Who's gonna win? Probably the werewolves... their members seem to have their crap together.

Ekekekekeke, I can't wait for the next chapter! You've got me on the edge of my seat and I wanna see what happens next! Can't wait for it. *smiles*
MBAV fan66 chapter 16 . 8/31/2015
And the battle is on! Blood suckers vs. shifters! Who will win?! Lol!

Poor Ethan. Being forced to do something to do something that he would never want to do. Kill his beloved boyfriend, Benny. Who loves with every fiber of his being. If only Benny knew what Jesse was charming him to do against his will.

And yay! The head Alpha guy, William, isn't such a big scary, mean hard ass like I thought he would be! Lol! He's ok with Benny dating a vampire! And who knew that he actually had dealings with Ethan in past before?! I wonder if Ethan realized that his physics tutor was actually Benny's alpha and a werewolf? And I wonder it was before he's was a vampire?

I can't wait to see how the battle unfolds! From the sounds of it, it's gonna be one heck of a battle! Lol!
TiredOfBeingNice chapter 16 . 8/31/2015
Oh god, this stuff is getting intense. Too intense to put together. Eeks!

Jesse is evil. Ethan is now gonna have to kill Benny, and I can't help but be scared. The battle that we've been waiting for has begun, and I am as excited as ever XD

Cannot wait for the next chapter to cure this cliffie you put us in *pouts* But I am excited for the next chapter :)
FancyPotatoFangirl chapter 15 . 1/2/2015
Oh my gosh please write the next chapter before I die
MBAV fan66 chapter 15 . 12/30/2014
Oh boy! Things are not looking good for Benny and Ethan's relationship together. Or probably Rory's attempt at trying to still be friends with Benny again. I can't wait for the next chapter which I'm assuming is when the big battle between wolves and vamps takes place!
champagnealec chapter 15 . 12/30/2014
Oh, mother fucker! Jesse's ass is going to get killed by Anastasia or Benny if he doesn't watch it, For once, I HOPE Anastasia's side looses the battle. She's got her fucking vampires going around killing the werewolves before battle. If only we had vampires as hot as Ethan and (Rory) we do have werewolves as hot as Benny.. For some reason werewolves fall off of the hotness tree.

Can it be Anne that dies next? 'Cause seriously she's a huge bitch.

Shit, Benny. Shit Ethan, something tells me that Benny's gonna become a hybrid, just tells me. Or Ethan comes close to killing Benny and he reminds Ethan that he loves him and stuff.

Ekekeke, almost the end! I can't wait for more! :)
TiredOfBeingNice chapter 15 . 12/30/2014
I am excited! The battle is drawing closer, Ethan's still tranced, golly this is gonna be a great chapter!
FancyPotatoFangirl chapter 14 . 12/22/2014
o.O O.o
OMG nooooooo update soon please!
MBAV fan chapter 14 . 12/20/2014
Oh no! Ethan been tranced to be a spy by Jesse and doesn't even know it! Arrg! That Jesse! And he's basically using Erica to gain info about Ethan's secrets! Ethan's gonna kill Benny and doesn't even know it yet! Hopefully their love will be strong enough for Ethan to fight the trance in the end or maybe Erica will over come her semi trance and warn Benny because of guilt! Benny's pack was so accepting about his relationship with a vampire. Why can't the vampires do the same. Stupid Jesse and vampire council laws!
cloud-dancer28 chapter 14 . 12/20/2014
please update soon. 3
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