As some others have pointed out what S.H.I.E.L.D. is doing is very Illegal in both British and American Law. He is too young and training kids to be warriors is a big fat no. In fact, it is also against International Law. And Sadly there are many nations that are doing just that and training kids to be Soldiers. So to put things in simple terms I am looking Forward to when The entires Earth's Population is going to get the verbal and disciplinary lashing to do them with whatever punishment that is coming to every person who has ever lived on this planet. And yes I know it will include me. And I know there may have been the thing I did that I don't remember but mostly while growing up I have hated Evil and wrongdoing and has said as much and pointed out that all I am doing is pointing out what you did wrong and that you need to change and acknowledge what you did and never do it again but know this, in the end, it will be the Heavenly Father and the Messiah that will be dishing out the punishments and rewards on humanity based on the actions of every person and many won't like it but tuff and to bad.

You have a Miss spelling you wrote becccme which should be become. You my want to fix this since their are people who use the app and one feature is text to speech thus making an audiobook function. So the with dyslexia or who are visually impaired may have some issues with understanding what you mean. So please go threw and double check your spelling and grammar for our disabled if nothing else.

Ya I'm not feeling it he's being played hard by shield I know Loki is not ok ATM but their using him an innocent kid their gonna indoctrinate him hard to hate Loki and Bella which sucks Harry has two of my fav chars as parents and he will hate them gayyy

I can't wait to see the next chapter

I loved it, but Narcissa was named after a flower, not a star

Lol. Please continue! Such an ingenious story idea.

This is amazing please make more

XD XD so hogwarts is a lie? O.o

cool update soon thanks

More Please!

First sentence and I adore you.

Darn! And it was just starting to get good, too! You should really write longer chapters, but honestly, I really just want to find out what happens next, so PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE! PLEASE!

The idea has so much potential. The execution is somewhat lacking. This fan-fic has talking head syndrome. That means you have no description involved at all. No thoughts or anything, really. It's all over the place. It would be great if you would rewrite the entire thing and actually develop it.

Please update

I love your fanfiction! I love it love it love it. Don't let the Haters weight you down. Keep writing please!