wow.

good, an very well written 2.

What a wonderful little crossover moment between two gentlemen from very different worlds. And so beautifully written, too. You're right, Remus and Hoenheim are very similar in many ways. But the one way they differ would be, I don't think Remus would've ever permanently walked out on his wife and child, had he had the chance to live as a family man. Everything Edward and Alphonse suffered and went through can ultimately be traced back to Hoenheim's mistake of leaving his family behind. When he seems so heavily burdened in the second anime and here in your story, it's hard to say if any of his anguish is even currently being caused by realizing that his actions had such extreme consequences meted out to his (latest?) sons.

This was truly beautiful. I almost didn't read it for a very silly reason (in order to save myself from reading a lot of terrible stories I usually only read ones with a lot of reviews). In this case I am extremely glad I did.

That is so awesome, because I was totally thinking about the similarities between these two YESTERDAY. Old, poor, dangerous, and in love with young happy loving women who are too stubborn to accept that the men they love are monsters. This was very very very very very good :D Loved it. And if the two worlds crossed, Dumbledore and Hohenheim would TOTALLY be friends.

Kept thinking Remus Hohenhiem and Van Lupin..

Oooooh. I like!
Lol sorry. I just sounded like a caveman there XD
No, but seriously. I liked it. There were some typos here and there, though.

Aw! So sweet! :)

Ah... This was wonderful... I actually went and looked up the correct definition, simply because I was confused, and gathered that the definition was not what I thought it would be. And it wasn't.

Great job! These two characters are truly similar, and it's wonderful to see an author(ess?) do complete justice to the two.

I was almost hesitant to read this, as it's such an odd meeting of characters. I'm glad I did though; it was wonderfully written, and the connection between Remus and Hoemheim was played out really well. Great job.
Dumbledore's revelation at the end was clever too.